求助 OG 13 SC 72

ddairy199 · 发表于 2013-2-8 09:27:06

想请问各位大牛OG 13 SC 72题的C选项
His studies of ice-polished rocks in his Alpine homeland, far outside the range of present-day glaciers, led Louis Agassiz in 1837 to propose the concept of an age when great ice sheets existed where there were areas now temperate.
OG解释说C选项错误的原因是：
where there were areas now temperate表述很wordy and confusing

想请问NN，那么C选项应该怎么改才不confusing and wordy？
另外where前面需不需要加一个in the place,变成existed in the place where...这样？
多谢！

ddairy199 · 发表于 2013-2-8 12:50:12

别沉啊。。。

ddairy199 · 发表于 2013-2-8 20:17:02

求大神解答。。。
exist后面需要加in the place where吗？还是直接exist where...这样？

zziinngg · 发表于 2013-6-12 11:17:10

要把整个there be句型改掉。因为there be句型表示““某地/某时间段存在着某物”，句子的结尾往往带有地点状语或时间状语。表示“那里有A、B、C等等东西”，虽然不表示从属关系，但是这个“某地”的概念是大于A、B、C的。
c选项的where从句翻译过来是： ice sheets存在于这样的这一地区，在这个地区上是有（包含了）现在的温带。而原选项A是说ice sheet存在的地区就是现在的温带。
方便的话，可以理解为“部分与整体”类型的错误。

ARG · 发表于 2013-6-12 12:26:09

(C) when great ice sheets existed where there were areas (now temperate)
The word "where" here is illogical. Ice sheets existed where there were areas?

More bout "there are"
For example:
(1)First-aid supplies are in the drawer.(We are already know that there are first-aid supplies;the point is to specify where they are located.)
(2)There are first-aid supplies in the drawer.(The point is to specify the existence of the first-aid supplies,but their location is an afterthought)

(B) great ice sheets existed in (what are now temperate) areas
is the same as:
ice sheets existed in areas that are now temperate
If you change (E) in this way:when great ice sheets existed in areas that are now temperate.
It would become another correct version of #B sentence.

非NN，希望能帮到你

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