【逵逵写作文14.0-TWE136】

136 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Everyone plays games sometimes（多余）. When it comes to whether playing a game is fun only when participants win only the winners can enjoy games, different people have different answers. Some argue that it is never to be fun unless they can win the game, while others think that failure or success does not indicate the value of a game overall. As far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter. I will elaborate some key reasons as follows.(连用3个I, 换个句型试试）

First of all, the purpose of games is not only to goes far beyond beating the competitors （改写题目的句子）win or to beat contenders. Frequently, we play a game to spend our spare time as simple as that. Take myself as an example; togethre with other football fans, I often used to togethre with other football fans, I often used to play this intriguing game on the picturesque lawn in front of the mainbuilding of my university play this football with football enthusiasts （这里football用了两次，而且有点拗口）when there is no class on the weekend. And thanks the pleasure climate created by playing,（thanks to...有幸运的是..的意思，口气有点软，和这里不符） I can establish and boost a friendship(不知道有这样说的吗？我在google里没有search到一个结果。你要是见过老外这样用告我一声） with them in such a joyful manner. Also,(个人认为提前，两个句子密切些） this is also a main belief the unchanging belief of Olympic Games. In addition, playing games provide us opportunities to learn something outsides classrooms. For instance, by playing chess or cards, we shape our ways of thinking.

Second, in my point of view, failure does not necessarily means lost. it is a better way to win through losing(通过失败来赢更好？）. People who fail in a game can still benefit from the precious experience that winner cannot directly(好像firsthand不习惯放句末？） get firsthand. As an English saying (语言是不是这样简洁些？）in English goes, “failure teaches success.” AfterExperiencing the bitter taste, people can be more prudent and confident to embrace future competition.

Admittedly, no one wants to fail. But it is impossible for a person to win all the time. People should be prepared to face with the failure. AndBesides, unlike wars, games are entertainment. So, do not take it too serious(书面一点）.take it easy.

In short, given reasons I have（少出现个人观点，把它作为客观事实论证） mentioned above, we can it is easy to conclude that the fun joyness(换换词） of a game does not depend on whether participants win or lose in the event the game. (And I truly believe that a positive attitude of game does both the game but people’s life good. 看不太懂)It should be fun and if we can make it fun when we play, we all end up as winners.

发现没有人给我修改吗～

大家看看写得怎么样，好的话我要求加精华贴哦！

                                likui

那就得改改。

变成失败之后的成功，会更加fun～

或者说有些人的对立观点是因为failure的痛苦所造成的～

是吧谢谢这位姑娘！

                        likui