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发表于 2013-4-2 07:24:03 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
61Peopleshould undertake risky action only after they have carefully
consideredits consequences.
There is a old saying that : Everything isready while only the chances pass by. Many people agree on that eachopportunity should be seized regardless of risk. Meanwhile, the opposite voiceadvocates that people should undertake risky action only after they havecarefully considered its consequence. Which one fits the world better? In myopinion, we should consider the risk before we take action ,while we may havethe courage to challenge when ignoring some risk.
   Onthe one hand, considering twice before taking action is a right that We maypreclude problems in advance and avoid much danger. For instance, when meetingsomeone drown in the water, we should consider the ability of ourselves;otherwise we may add trouble if we jump to the river without the ability toswim. What’s more, taking consequences before we make decision, such as investingor choosing the career, contributes to the higher possibility to success.
On the other hand, we are known about that everything contains riskand opportunity at the same time. Considering too much may make us miss thechance which will never comes back. Sometimes, the chance is like the meteorthat passes by so fast that we are not allowed to think too much
At the same time, the more we think about, the less courage we havewhich is always needed in doing something. There is a famous experiment thatsome people are asked to cross the bridge in dark. All of them can cross itwhen they have nothing about what is under the bridge. When some light is givenso that people can see crocodile lies under the bridge, more than half of themare feared to cross the bridge anymore. When the light is all on that peoplecan see the whole things very clearly, people are all amazed to find thatactually there is a glass floor above the crocodile. The experiment tells usthat sometimes we may lose the courage to move on when knowing the risk, whilewe may accomplish the task perfectly when we are not very clear about the realdanger.
To sum up, at most time we should consider the consequences beforewe undertake risky actions. After all , safety is most important. And thedecision may be wiser after thinking twice. While we may allowed to take riskdoing something ignoring possible negative consequence. Maybe it is for we takethe risk that we success finally.

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沙发
发表于 2013-4-2 10:57:10 | 只看该作者
While we may allowed to take risk doing something ignoring possible negative consequence. Maybe it is for we take the risk that we success finally.

很多语法问题。。may+allowed  

it is for we+do

success 是名词,we+名词 算什么结构呢?


通篇语法问题太多,作者需要多读多背多练。
板凳
发表于 2013-4-2 13:12:27 | 只看该作者
There is a old saying that : Everything is ready while only the chances pass by.? Many people agree on that each opportunity should be seized regardless of risk. Meanwhile, the opposite voice advocates that people should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequence.前面这两句其实有问题,第一句话说不管有木有风险,每个机会都应该抓住,而后一部分说只有仔细考虑过后果才可以采取有风险的行动。完全没有你想要的那种对比效果。其实就只是,人们需不需要考虑后果然后采取有风险的行动, Which one fits the world better感觉这句话是不是有点生硬? In my opinion, we should consider the risk before we take action ,while we may have the courage to challenge when ignoring some risk.
   Onthe one hand, considering twice before taking action is a right that We may preclude problems in advance and avoid much danger. For instance, when meeting someone drown in the water, we should consider the ability of ourselves;otherwise we may add trouble if we jump to the river without the ability to swim. What’s more, taking consequences before we make decision, such as investingor choosing the career, contributes to the higher possibility to success.
On the other hand, we are known about that everything contains risk and opportunity at the same time. Considering too much may make us miss the chance which will never come back. Sometimes, the chance is like the meteor that passes by so fast that we are not allowed to think too much.At the same time, the more we think about, the less courage we have which is always needed in doing something. There is a famous experiment that some people are asked to cross the bridge in dark. All of them can cross it when they have nothing about what is under the bridge. When some light is given so that people can see crocodile lies under the bridge, more than half of them are feared to cross the bridge anymore. When the light is all on that people can see the whole things very clearly, people are all amazed to find thatactually there is a glass floor above the crocodile. The experiment tells usthat sometimes we may lose the courage to move on when knowing the risk, whilewe may accomplish the task perfectly when we are not very clear about the realdanger.
To sum up, at most time we should consider the consequences beforewe undertake risky actions. After all , safety is most important. And thedecision may be wiser after thinking twice. While we may allowed to take riskdoing something ignoring possible negative consequence. Maybe it is for we takethe risk that we success finally.
文章还是略显简单。比如在战争中一个行动的后果,可否完全知晓,在采取有危险的行动前需要考虑什么,再比如一个投资决策,可否考虑到所有后果,可否在考虑后果后在做决策。再比如一个手术,医生能否考虑到所有后果,如果要考虑到,又会不会错过机会,其实可以有很多方向展开,举出一两个具体的方面进行论述,说服力会好很多的
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