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chaoyansuan · 发表于 2013-2-20 10:55:24

Task: Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.

Nowadays, more and more people consider what is happiness and how to get happiness. At hands there is an issue discussing whether job has more effect on people’s happiness than the social life does. Personally speaking, I don’t agree with that job has more influence on the happiness than the social life does.

Firstly, people can get more true friends in social life than in the job and good friends can make us feel happier. On one hand, it is difficult to make true friends in the job, especially about business or politics. As the saying goes, “A country does not have permanent friends, only permanent interests.” It works the same in the relationship between people. However, when we make some friends in social life, there is little interest conflict between the friends so that these are true friends without using each other. On the other hand, friends can help us enjoy the life. For example, we can have a cup of coffee and talk about the work or life with each other in the afternoon. Then we can get away from the worries and anxieties we have in the work and feel ourselves relaxed. In a word, true friends can give us the sense of happiness and we can make more true friends in social life than in our jobs.

Secondly, social life has a beneficial influence on our well-round development. Not only because we can deal with different kinds of people and make a lot of friends as I have written, but also because we can learn a lot of skills or knowledge in the social life. For example, when we attend a club or association about eastern literature, we will know some famous books in ancient China, like “the journey to the west” or “ three kingdoms”. Therefore we can know more about the literature and history about the mysterious East Asia and know how beautiful this world is – not only in America, but also in some other areas. Or we can attend a fishing club, it is helpful for us to improve the fishing skills and enjoy our life.

These friends you have made and the skills you have leant in the social life can also give you happiness indirectly. Admittedly, some jobs offer us more money and money sometimes is important for us to enjoy our life. However, the skills and friends in the social life can also help you become wealthy. When you have more friends and accumulate more abilities than others, you will have more chance to get succeed. For example, one of my friends who is an employee in a small company and can only earn about 2,000 dollars per month. He is interested in making cakes and join a cake-making association. He has learnt about how to make cakes about 3 years and have a lot of friends there. Then he decided to open his own cake shop and resigned from the small company. Because of his excellent skill and the help from these friends, he can earn more than 10,000 dollars per month now and he is doing what he enjoyed and lived in a happy life. This success is not occasional and there are many examples that friends and skills in the social life help people become successful and enjoy the happiness.

The friends we make and the skills we learn in the social lives are more priceless than the jobs and they can help us get the happiness both directly and indirectly.

woshimind · 发表于 2013-2-21 22:08:41

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Nowadays, more and more people consider what is happiness and how to get happiness. At hands there is an issue discussing(heated issue) whether job has more effect on people’s happiness than the social life does. Personally speaking, I don’t agree with that job has more influence on the happiness than the social life
Firstly, people can get(make) more true friends in social life than in the job and good friends can make us feel happier. On one hand, it is difficult to make true friends in the job(working), especially about business or politics. As the saying goes, “A country does not have permanent friends, only permanent interests.” It works the same in the relationship between people. However, when we make some friends in social life, there is little interest(s) conflict between the friends so that these are true friends without using each other. On the other hand, friends can help us enjoy the life. For example, we can have a cup of coffee and talk about the work or life with each other in the afternoon. Then we can get away from the worries and anxieties we have(encountered) in the work and feel ourselves relaxed. In a word, true friends can give us the sense of happiness and we can make more true friends in social life than in our jobs.

Secondly, social life has a beneficial influence on our well-round development. Not only because we can deal with different kinds of people and make a lot of friends as I have written above , but also because we can learn a lot of skills or knowledge in the social life(by participating in social activities). For example, when we attend a club or association about eastern literature, we will know some famous books in ancient China, like “the journey to the west” or “ three kingdoms”. Therefore we can know more about the literature and history about the mysterious East Asia and know how beautiful this world is – not only in America, but also in some other areas(countries). Or we can attend a fishing club, it is helpful for us to improve the fishing skills and enjoy our life.

These friends you have made and the skills you have leant(learnt,大牛肯定是笔误哈）) in the social life can also give you(us) happiness indirectly. Admittedly, some jobs offer us more money, undoubtly, money sometimes is important for us to enjoy our life. However, the skills and friends in the social life can also help you become wealthy. (the skills and friends we have got in the social life can render us more bright) When you have more friends and accumulate more abilities than others, you will have more chance to get succeed(success). For example, one of my friends who is an employee in a small company and can only earn about 2,000 dollars per month. He is interested in making cakes and join a cake-making association. He has learnt about how to make cakes about （for)3 years and have(made） a lot of friends there. Then he decided to open his own cake shop and resigned from the small company. （then he decided to resigned from his company and then run his own business). Because of his excellent skill and the help from these friends, he can earn more than 10,000 dollars per month now and he is doing what he enjoyed and lived(is living) in a happy life. This success is not occasional and there are many examples that friends and skills in the social life help people become successful and enjoy the happiness.(happy)

The friends we make and the skills we learn in the social lives are more priceless than the jobs and they can help us get the happiness both directly and indirectly.

xyqkj · 发表于 2013-3-2 10:05:14

楼主写的好啊！～

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