我的雅思作文8分 经验——— 改写小作文开头段四大法宝

雅思小作文一般要求20分钟内完成150个字的写作，时间紧，分数重。而开头段一般是对题目的改写。那么如何进行有效而快速地改写呢？

Summarize the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below givesinformation on consumer spending on different items in five differentcountries in 2002

其关键词有： table ; give;information; consumer spending; different items; different countries;

原题：The table below givesinformation on consumer spending on different items in five differentcountries in 2002.

改写：the table below showsinformation on how much consumers spend on different items in fivedifferent countries in 2002.

原题中“spending”是名词，改写成“spend”，变成了动词， 从而成功改写了整个句子。

Given is a table showing the information onconsumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

将动词“give”提前，从而将开头段变成了一个倒装句。

  Thegraph below illustrates data on consumer expenditure on variouscategories in five different nations in 2002.

将table变成graph， 将show变成illustrate，将differentitems 换成various categories，同义词替换，从而成功地进行了改写。

Table：chart/graph/line graph/bar graph/pie graph/statistics/data/diagram/illustration/flowchart/map

Give:demonstrate/describe/present/show/compare/illustrate

information about=the proportion/percentageof… the number/amount of/ changes/ variations/how 引导的名词性从句

如将different items这种概括性的内容变成具体内容“ three categories((Food/Drink/ Tobacco,Clothing/Footwear andLeisure/Education)。将five differentcountries 换成Ireland, Italy, Spain,Sweden and Turkey。

The graph below illustrates information onon consumer expenditure on three categories(Food/Drink/Tobacco,Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education) in five differentcountries (Ireland, Turkey, Italy, Spain and Sweden) in 2002.

掌握四大法宝，灵活改写关键词，从而迅速改写题目，力争得到写作高分。

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