Two new studies indicate that many people become obese more due to the factthat their bodies burn calories too slowly than overeating. (A) due to the fact that their bodies burn calories too slowly than overeating (B) due to their bodies burning calories too slowly than to eating too much (C) because their bodies burn calories too slowly than that they are overeaters (D) because their bodies burn calories too slowly than because they eat too much (E) because of their bodies burning calories too slowly than because of their eating too much the key 1、A、B选项为什么不平行？怎么改可以平行？表示理不清 2、E选项改成 their bodies' burning calories 是不是就和 their eating too much 平行了？
A due to the fact that their bodies burn calories too slowly than overeating
the fact 是wordy 的，more due to ...than due to 这个才是平行， overeating 谁OVEREATING了？没主语 突兀的出现了overeating
B due to their bodies burning calories too slowly than to eating too much due to 的是 burns calories too slowly , 不是due to body. eating too much 很akward，没主语没啥的
E 改法也不对 。body能自发 burning ，eating 跟to much 跟前面不平行。 burning of wordy,能简洁的主谓宾解决问题的 就甭用v ing ,noun of 之类。
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