语文分册一题

billylau · 发表于 2013-9-23 10:05:58

From the earliest days of the tribe, kinship determined
theway in which the Ojibwa society organized its
labor, provided access to its resources, and defined
rights and obligations involved in the distribution and
consumption of those resources.
(Al and defined rights and obligations involved in the
distribution and consumption of those resources
(8) defining rights and obligations involved in their
distribution and consumption
(C) and defined rights and obligations astheywere
involved in its distribution and consumption
(D) whose rights and obligations were defined in
their distribution and consumption
(E) the distribution and consumption of them
defined by rightsand obligations

想问C的问题在哪？是因为不简洁吗？

billylau · 发表于 2013-9-23 13:22:07

miqi20050417 发表于 2013-9-23 12:21
1）为什么og说"as they were" wordy呢？

首先看看，they的指代，我们看看前面出现的名词：

谢谢，我是觉得他说its没有clear referent是指its的什么的distribution and consumption，不是说its本身指代不清，一个句子出现的its指代一样的东西很明显its本身没有指代不清，所以C不对的一个方面可能和原句清晰指代了什么的distribution and consumption（of those resources)有关。本身（of those resources)的意思就是of its resources正如你说的一样。

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