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hsy94 · 发表于 2015-11-3 23:53:10

People whotry to acquire more than one skill are more likely to become successful thanpeople who just focus on one skill?

With societybecoming more andmore competitive, people have started to discuss whether people develop manydifferent skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only.In my opinion, definitely, nowadays people with different skills are morelikely to succeed than others because of the following reasons.

Firstly, the most crucial reason for suchassertion is that people with more skills can be more competitive. Skills, suchas social skill, managing skill, or language skill, are habitual requirement insociety. Someone who only have one ability, their career would be restrainedbecause generally most working environments are extremely complicate thatpeople cannot face all kinds of challenges with one simple skill. Take themajor architecture as an example. People who work in an architecture office notonly be required to have an outstanding sense toward aesthetics, but also tounderstanding the knowledge of equipment and materials.

Even though, someone might argue thatacquiring more than one skill at the same time would distract them or evenreduce the expertise, I believe it is beneficial for people to obtain severalskills at the same time so that they can increase their learning efficiency.And enable individuals have more opportunity and chance to choose their owncareer as possible. For instance, My classmate of university learns English andmarketing at one time. With globalization change our life, she told me herbehavior could not only allow her to read international thesis without anyeffort, but also enhance her to learn better about marketing. As the result,the opportunity for her to choose the job is boarder than others, of course,she chooses a job which is perfect to her and everyone in my class are admiredher. I believe knowledge is connected to each other, it is more favorable forpeople to gain assorted skills for my point of view.

From what has been discussed, we can easilydraw a conclusion that people have varied skills is likely to have a greatachievement.

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hsy94 · 发表于 2015-11-5 20:59:50

the way of a person’s dress is an indication of his or her personality or character?

With development of economy, people are paying more attention to their appearance. Can the dress imply a person’s character? For my perspective, the way that people dress themselves can barely disclose their personalities.
First of all, people’s choices are easily affected by the currently fashion trend. When we go strolling in the shopping mall, we are able to easily get to know what is prevalent at present through a glimpse of a similar merchandise showing up in the stores, what I mean is we can notice the change of fashion trend quickly. Take jeans of an example. A couple years ago, the flare style was so popular that every woman has at least one jean in their closet. Now, this type of jean is fade out from fashion. The skinny style jeans take over and show on the stage. This type of jeans with various bloom in all store. As a result, when people intend to buy one jean, their decisions will surely be impacted by this change.
Secondly, the same clothes could be choose by different people with utterly different type. Nowadays, the clothes are manufactured in factories with the huge quantity, and then they are distributed to all over the world. Being consequent, it’s not strong that two different people wear the same style. It doesn’t mean those people occupy the same personality. For instance, people in the company need to wear uniform. However, not all of them perform equally well.
Furthermore, the people’s style of dressing is not fixed, and they often have several different style clothes in their closet more than just one. They can change style of clothes in different situation. They can change their dress style, but their characteristic won’t change.
All in all, we cannot determine a person from the way they dress since people’s choice can be influenced by the fashion trend, the different type of people might pick the same clothes and their dress style are not fixed.

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Aaron.SUN · 发表于 2015-11-8 10:40:35

With development of economy, people are paying more attention to their appearance. Can the dress imply a person’s character? For(为from) my perspective, the way that people dress themselves can barely disclose their personalities.(简单明了)
First of all, people’s choices are easily affected（改为influence更好） by the currently fashion trend. When we go strolling in the shopping mall, we are able to easily get to know what is prevalent at present through a glimpse of a similar merchandise showing up in the stores（有点绕，不过看到懂，简单一点好）, what I mean is we can notice the change of fashion trend quickly. Take jeans of（是as） an example. A couple years ago, the flare style was so popular that every woman has (had,时态一致)at least one jean in their closets. Now, this type of jean is fade(去掉is,应该是主动) out from fashion. The skinny style jeans take over and show on the stage. This type of jeans with various（缺个名词） bloom in all store. As a result, when people intend to buy one jean, their decisions will surely be impacted by this change.虽然这一段理由很充分，但段末尾点才好
Secondly, the same clothes could be chose（过去式） by different people with utterly different types（复数哦）. Nowadays, the clothes are manufactured in factories with the huge quantity（是效率吧，哈哈）, and then they are distributed to all over the world. Being consequent,（consequently） it’s not strange(是这个意思吗？) that two different people wear the same style. It doesn’t mean those people have（动词不贴切） the same personality. For instance, people in the company need to wear uniform. However, not all of them perform equally well.（这个例子再丰满一点）
Furthermore, the people’s style of dressing is not fixed, and they often have several different style clothes in their closet more than just one. They can change style of clothes in different situation. They can change their dress style, but their characteristic won’t change.
All in all, we cannot determine a person by the way they dress since people’s choice can be influenced by the fashion trend, the different type of people might pick the same clothes and their dressing style are not fixed.

师姐的文章写的很好，稍有瑕疵，我很欣赏你的文章结构和文章逻辑，思路很清晰，建议多用一些高级词汇和高级句式（你是有基础有能力的），继续加油！

hsy94 · 发表于 2015-11-10 08:33:18

All the university students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study is?
Nowadays, university students are expected to be elites in all fields. They are allowed to reach by the so-called social trend, regardless of their wills and abilities. Recently, whether those students should be asked to put their efforts on history curriculums which even have nothing to do with their major has become a heated debate. From my perspective, I hold the standpoint that it is no necessity for students to take history courses.
First of all, university is a place where makes people professional in their fields, instead of teaching them how to review and experience the whole world in history insight. In many countries, history is being taught as a required course for many years before university, it allows junior senior students enough basic knowledge on history. A particular example for this is Chinese education, with thousands of years’ splendid history, students are taking required courses to know their country better from primary school to high school. So, there is no need for them to study the content once again and repeat the same knowledge when they step into university, Unless the students whose major is history which is the most important part for them.
Secondly, it is known to all that extra courses are surely charge extra tuitions. Apparently, requiring students to take extra history courses will increase financial burdens of some lower-income family. From the database of world research organization, there are more than 18% young people away from access to university only because of the poverty. I believe what we are trying to do is lower this astonishing number, instead of charging more money by forcing them to take extra history courses.
What’s more, we are all taught that interest is our best teacher. When people access into university, they already select the fields which they are interested in. they also have rights to choose the courses they are willing to study. Force them to take history courses would not only increase their pressure of study, take up more times which they should spend on their professional courses, but also will gradually decrease their curiosity of modern society as well since they always focus on their past. I strongly support a man without creation and imagination is horrible.
From what has been discussed, we can easily see easily draw the conclusion that we shouldn’t force student to study history courses. Not only because the money issue, but also the development of ourselves. We can read history books in our spare time and let it to be a good habit. So, university force student to take history courses is no longer a wise choice.

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