求各位牛牛帮改CV~~凌乱嘈杂的第一稿，附完整文档@@虽然内容不咋地但格式还是不错滴~~经历君你还可以更水一点吗可以吗可以吗~~

chachasmailbox · 发表于 2012-10-22 06:14:56

目标是荷兰马大的internationalbusiness（Finance）以及可能阿大蒂尔堡自由大总之是荷兰这块儿。。。但确实没啥相关经历只好勉强攒满一页。。
Education
09/2009 – present XX University/ School of Economics/ Finance China
· Candidate for the degree of Bachelor of Finance in June 2013.
Core curriculum: International Finance, International Settlement, Corporate Finance, Econometrics, Investment Banking
Major GPA：88.3/100 Rank: 21/111
· Minor in Applied Psychology
09/2012 - present University of Minho/ Department of Economics and Business Portugal
· To perform a period of exchange study until February, 2013
· Attending general courses in the field of management and economics.

Experience
06/2011-07/2012 Carried out a student project about the Postal Savings Bank of China
· Interviewed the stuff and managers in four sub-branches and summarized their views
· Collected the data of the distribution of the Postal Savings Bank of China and analysed its correlation with local GDP and population density
03/2012-05/2012 Participated in "Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest
· Improved the business proposal by providing a thorough analysis of the competitors in the particular industry that we intended to get involved in
· Summarized and presented our research and finding to the team managing director
07/2012-2012/08 Huarong Securities- Summer Internship
· Introduced to potential customer about the latest services and products
· Assisted the manager in providing monthly report about customer's investment account
06/2012-07/2012 Museum of Finance, China- Volunteered Interpreter
· Introduced to visitors detailed knowledge about the items in four different exhibitions at least once per week

Awards
· Attained Outstanding Student Scholarship for three consecutive years (2009-2012),
amounting to a total of 7000RMB
· Won Excellence Award in National English Competition for College Students (2010)
· Won Excellence Award in "Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest (2011)

chachasmailbox · 发表于 2012-10-22 22:29:02

附文档~~自认为虽然内容不咋地，格式还是不错的！！

gege112 · 发表于 2012-10-22 22:35:55

07/2012-2012/08 Huarong Securities- Summer Internship
· Introduced to potential customer about the latest services and products

这个日期，是不是有问题..

overexams · 发表于 2012-10-22 22:42:24

Experience里这些标题是不是改改，“Carried out a student project”是对自己的形容，作为经历的题目不是很合适。最好在格式上搞成三栏式，比如：【03/2012-05/2012 “Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest

articipant】

chachasmailbox · 发表于 2012-10-22 22:42:30

07/2012-2012/08 Huarong Securities- Summer Internship
· Introduced to potential customer about the latest services and products

这个日期，是不是有问题..

-- by 会员 gege112 (2012/10/22 22:35:55)

是的呢！！！谢谢你啊~~~

chachasmailbox · 发表于 2012-10-22 22:45:22

Experience里这些标题是不是改改，“Carried out a student project”是对自己的形容，作为经历的题目不是很合适。最好在格式上搞成三栏式，比如：【03/2012-05/2012 “Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest

articipant】

-- by 会员 overexams (2012/10/22 22:42:24)

恩是的！！！！谢谢哈~~改了~~那是不是student project那栏不能写在经历里了。。。

overexams · 发表于 2012-10-22 22:48:26

Experience里这些标题是不是改改，“Carried out a student project”是对自己的形容，作为经历的题目不是很合适。最好在格式上搞成三栏式，比如：【03/2012-05/2012 “Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest

articipant】

-- by 会员 overexams (2012/10/22 22:42:24)

恩是的！！！！谢谢哈~~改了~~那是不是student project那栏不能写在经历里了。。。

-- by 会员 chachasmailbox (2012/10/22 22:45:22)

不太清楚你这个student project是个什么性质的项目，自发的？学校项目？社团活动？

chachasmailbox · 发表于 2012-10-22 22:52:32

Experience里这些标题是不是改改，“Carried out a student project”是对自己的形容，作为经历的题目不是很合适。最好在格式上搞成三栏式，比如：【03/2012-05/2012 “Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest

articipant】

-- by 会员 overexams (2012/10/22 22:42:24)

恩是的！！！！谢谢哈~~改了~~那是不是student project那栏不能写在经历里了。。。

-- by 会员 chachasmailbox (2012/10/22 22:45:22)

不太清楚你这个student project是个什么性质的项目，自发的？学校项目？社团活动？

-- by 会员 overexams (2012/10/22 22:48:26)

其实就是一个课程的作业，相当于是自发的，因为实在没做过啥有名头的项目所以就把它写上嘞T^T

chachasmailbox · 发表于 2012-10-22 23:26:47

Experience里这些标题是不是改改，“Carried out a student project”是对自己的形容，作为经历的题目不是很合适。最好在格式上搞成三栏式，比如：【03/2012-05/2012 “Challenge Cup" Entrepreneurship Contest

articipant】

-- by 会员 overexams (2012/10/22 22:42:24)

恩是的！！！！谢谢哈~~改了~~那是不是student project那栏不能写在经历里了。。。

-- by 会员 chachasmailbox (2012/10/22 22:45:22)

不太清楚你这个student project是个什么性质的项目，自发的？学校项目？社团活动？

-- by 会员 overexams (2012/10/22 22:48:26)

overexams大侠，请表嫌弃我@@真的不能写了么？？

chachasmailbox · 发表于 2012-10-24 00:57:03

决定本着大无畏的精神就这么交了，听说荷兰这块儿好像不是特别严格。。。。

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