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发表于 2012-10-2 23:16:43 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
For many years now,there had been widely hold concernwhether school should give the student a long vocation or the several short vocation.Obviously ,as some body may find ,thevast majority people believe that a long vocation is wise the choice in this  currentsituation . Because it can have long time to have a full rest and can make afurther travel to achieve   my fantasygoal this idea of view is flawed in many aspects. this ideais opposed by numerious of people who hold opinion that take a short vocation is the reasonable and smart the selection to  schedual. As far as  i am concerned ,concerned ,icompletely agree with  a latter idea thatseveral short vocation is more adopt for student to preparetheir schedule.my reason is several vocation can lead us to have our semesterbreak so that improve our comprehension for our knowledge and it canavoid the traffic jam when we have a trip.
Albeit there may be some disadvantage about divide thevocation ,the advantage is far outweigh them .Amony them ,the most significant one cited is that it is good forprovide  a time to digest knowledge  that we were just learned .Take something for instance ,my friend Mike is a high school student,he is boring in his curriculum too tight to study.he want a chance to have breathe .while a long vocation was also boringthat he had nothing to do in such  a longperiod of time . He want a 3 short period for his own schedule .this case is not a rare ,it just an uniqueof dozen what i have heard .Thereby  ,iprefer to select a short period .
Furthermore ,anothor reason that can lead tostrenghten my position that  shortvocaton can reduce the pressure of the traffic .According  to the recent survey conducted by china daily ,one of the authority newsmedia in china ,the article  find 45%traffic jam are caused by vocation,and the 23% accident are happen by the concentrate vocation.So if want to reduce thiscrisis,the only way is divide the vacation immediately.It can furtherstrengthen to my viewpoint.
Admittedly ,opinon over their vitue different formperson to person ,as the case of issue ,i do not deny that there may be somedisadvantage of the divide the vacationsh s uch as the constant period to enjoy the happy and it can improve the economy ofour country.The advantage is can not undermine what i have stated before.
As can we seen from the analysis,we can safely come toteh conclusion that although everone believe that the long vacation is the good concept for student ,the current factor,demonstrate that the several short vacation is more confortable for studentand kid .
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沙发
发表于 2012-10-3 12:26:45 | 只看该作者
咦,好像这不是今天的题目,你是自己写?
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-4 10:14:55 | 只看该作者
嗯,求评价
地板
发表于 2012-10-11 23:33:01 | 只看该作者
嗯,求评价
-- by 会员 txwilliam (2012/10/4 10:14:55)


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