求解一道语法题

zy03245 · 发表于 2012-7-6 16:36:25

有一道题
Declining values for farm equipment and land, the collateral against which farmers borrow to get through the harvest season, is going to force many lenders tighten or deny credit this spring.

D.which farmers use as collateral to borrow against to get through the harvest season, are
E.the collateral against which farmers borrow to get through the harvest season, are

除了E和原句比较相似外，D有什么明显错误么？
求各位指教！感激不尽！

sally9031 · 发表于 2012-9-20 21:14:05

og上说d选项太罗嗦···

herbertchase · 发表于 2012-10-1 08:01:30

D.which farmers use as collateral to borrow against to get through the harvest season, are；除了redundancy， Which 引导非限定性定语从句，侧重于修饰与其紧邻的名词，此处代表前面的Land,但是句子的含义应该 collateral是指farm equipment and land，故which在这里不是很合适；

E.the collateral against which farmers borrow to get through the harvest season, are; the collateral名词，作为同位语，against which...修饰名词collateral.

求解一道语法题

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