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[作文互改] issue第五篇 觉得写得不怎么好 求指点 思路 句法 什么都行

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发表于 2012-9-12 23:35:41 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
TOPIC: ISSUE61 - " People shouldundertake risky action only after they have carefully considered itsconsequences."
WORDS: 491          TIME: 00:40:00          DATE: 2012/9/12 22:02:51
提纲:
1。考虑风险可以使结果在可控制范围,可以根据结果修正做法
2。很多情况危急,结果复杂不宜全面细致考虑,需要立即行动
3。两者不矛盾,相互结合,个别情形适合冒险,对于结果预估,可将过程分段,估计小范围结果,成功率大一些


People in our modern society are faced withnumerous opportunities in both work and everyday life. When it comes to theissue of whether people should take action after having concerned each singlepossibility, people get into a dilemma. Some individuals suppose that it is toorisky and unpredictable if simply take actions without carefully considered allthe possibilities. However, only by concerning the issue objectively and as awhole could people obtain a more rational conclusion.

People who stand for taking action aftercareful consideration pay most attention on the possible risks that might comealong if they take the action arbitrarily. With the scientific prediction ofthe risks, the possibility of one task to be successful would increase to alarge extent. There is also a warranted term in economy, the opportunity cost,which measures the cost you have to pay when you make a decision. Only bytaking possible consequences of the action into account could the task be morelikely to be accomplished, and more importantly, could the decision maker fixsome details in the action then obtain a more satisfying result.

In contrast, the suggestion of careful andcomprehensive consideration might contribute little to the task, or incontradiction impede to the progress. Some situations are exigent, and theemergency would leave people almost no time for comprehensive consideration,for example, the disastrous earthquake happened four years ago in SichuanProvince in China. People are nearly all devoted to the rescue of the wounded,and this could be never delayed by even minutes' consideration, deriving fromthat the human lives weigh too much than any material assets. Somecircumstances are too complicated for people to reconsider and even hesitate.Take the catastrophic climate change happened in the past decades as anexample, the possible consequences are so plentiful and the deteriorationunpredictable that people would not take control of the natural force even theypredicted the results all around. It is entirely possible that the more carefulconsideration people make, the more likely they are likely to miss theappropriate opportunity to overcome the difficulty.

However, even given with the advantages anddisadvantages of the comprehensive consideration, it is not conflicting if madeuse of rationally. It might contribute more if people dare to accept challengesand are adventurous to take action in some specific conditions. It is probablymore efficient if people consider the results in the progress rather than atthe end of the progress. Since accomplishing tasks step by step in proceduresis a more scientific method to reach the goal.

Though whether people should take somerisky actions or take actions carefully still awaits further discussion, theadvantages and disadvantages of the issue has been comprehensibly recognized.Only by setting up an accurate estimation of the issue could the disadvantagesbe weakened and could the advantages be made use of to a large extent, and thusmaximize the merit provided for people.
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发表于 2012-9-13 10:21:57 | 只看该作者
偏题了。

People shouldundertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.

题目说,人们只能在仔细考虑后果后才能冒险。

反面应该是如果没有考虑后果,冒险会怎么样?

不是考虑风险,而是考虑后果。
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