[求助]我的第二次习作，请帮忙批改好吗？TWE027

Do you agree of disagree with the following statement?People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nobody would like to do those things he/she does not enjoy doing.Howerer,the fact(can you show which fact you refer to?) is that you just can't be arbitrary all the time.Maybe you really want to dance in the middle of a street,but there are so many moving cars that you cannot do this unless you want to leave this world.(the meaning is not clear).the introduction is not clear. when you use the pronoun "you", be aware of that "you" only refer to the reader. this usage can affect readers' emotion.

Also,a professor is not supposed to be late or absent for his classes.Everyone takes his/her own part in his/her circle,so something called responsibility is claimed.(no clue to what you are talking about)An irresponsible person will never be welcome:just imagine how a professor will be treated if he always lost his/her time.

this paragraph is little related to the topic. it is a good idea to express the idea directly, do not go around.(it is different from chinese writing)

"No pains,no gains."It is impossible to achieve success in any area without hard work.I belive nobody will regard working day and night as a pleasant thing ,but that is the way Bill Gates made his fortune.Sometimes these troublesome things really deserve doing,isn't it?(hard working does not mean that it is not enjoyful. the same problem as the precedent paragraph)

Of course,if you are interested in  your work or something like that,it would be better.It is no doubt that a person who like water will be more likely to swim well than someone who does not.

Actually,we cannot always be so lucky to be required to do things we enjoy,so it is not strange to find that you are forcing yourself to do some unpleasant things.In some extent that is the demand of ourselves,our society,and moreover,our species.

I would like to say, the conclusion is the best part in the whole essay. at least the idea here is clear although is awkward.

感觉这篇写得很有问题，好像很多词法都不对似的。没有参考任何模板。

谢谢，辛苦牛牛们了！