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Each year companies in the United Statescould save as much as $58 billion annually by preventing
illness among employees and gain as muchas $200 billion through improving performance of
workers if they simply provided officeswith cleaner air.
(A) annually by preventing illness amongemployees and gain as much as $200 billion through
improving performance of workers if theysimply provided
(B) annually if they prevented employeeillness and gain as much as $200 billion through worker
performance improved by simply providing
(C) annually in employee illnessprevention and gain as much as $200 billion through worker
performance improved by simply providing
(D) in employee illness prevention andgain as much as $200 billion through improving performance
of workers if they simply provided
(E) by preventing illness among employeesand gain as much as $200 billion through improved
worker performance if they simplyprovided
(A) annually和each year意思表达重复; improving表示动作的过程,而这里的逻辑意思应该是
performance已经被提高,其结果造成了$200 billion的收益
(B) annually和each year意思表达重复; and gain有和if they prevented并列的嫌疑; through worker
performance improved…的重心在worker performance,因此不能准确的表达出原句的意思,应该将
improved置于worker之前,使重心变为improved worker performance; by simply providing offices
with cleaner air意思表达不清,没有表达出providing的施动者是谁
(C) 错误同B选项; inemployee illness prevention表达笨拙,尽量不要用动词的抽象名词形式
(D) prevention表达笨拙; improving不如improved意思表达准确
(E) 正确, by preventing结构比in…prevention结构意思表达更清晰; 使用improved代替improving更
符合逻辑意思
请问，为什么后面的Improved表示已经提高了performance导致gain了利润，
而前面是by preventing用进行时呢？不是应该也是“已经阻止”才导致save了$么……
为啥一个用ing一个用ed咧~？
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