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新手tpo1的作文,求各位板砖~8.26就考试了,不想死翘翘

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发表于 2012-8-11 00:58:46 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.




University is an important part for anindividual, because one can figure out or even achieve what he or she wants init. Some would like to devote more time in the libraries and classes to get asmuch knowledge as they can; some may want to make more friends and build ahealthier body as well. Thus, as the community that supports the most activeelites in our society, university should not deprive any rights that arebeneficial for any aspect of university students. From my point of view, thesocial networking activities carry the same weight as libraries.
Firstly, we cannot deny that studentschoose to go to a university to get a new life experience not just study inclasses and library. By attending sports activities and social activities theycan get to know more people and experience new stuff. An interesting lifeexperience will surely let the students release their stress and concentratemore easily on the study. What's more, if the department spares more money onthe sports and social events, such as the meetings with great entrepreneurs orleaders, basketball games, there would be more students inspired by those greatminds and players.
Secondly, more social and sports activitiesmean more opportunities to let the university be known by more people. Somepotential students are possible to be attracted by the great facilities andopenness of university. For example, lot students are crazy about thebasketball game and get to know some great basketball teams that belong to someuniversities. They will pay attention on that university at any time even inchoosing to be a student there.
In the end, I have to admit that theuniversity is a place to educate people to be independent in mind. However, ifno fun and interacting with people, there would be no more attraction forstudents even teachers as well. Therefore, I strongly believe that theuniversity should pay the same amount of attention on the sports and socialactivities and libraries.


另外还有综合写作的一篇,也求分析求制导啊~~~~
The lecture provides different opinionswith the passage's. The professor holds that a four-day workweek will notbenefit the company's profits, and neither will reduce the workloads of theemployees. What's more, he also argue that a shorter workweek may also put morerisks on worker's career development instead of improve the quality of theirlives.
To begin with this arguing, the professorpoint out that a cut in the work time from five days to four days would requirethe company to hire more people to do the same amount of work. This would forcethe company to spend more money on training people, medical treatment, officespace and even more computers. Thus, more cost is indispensible for thecompany. However, the passage leave out this information and just say that theycan make the payment lower to 80 present and hire more people.
Secondly, the work expectations of thoseemployers may increase not as the reading stated that the worker could workless and divide the task to more people. The reality is that companies areinclined to reduce the cost and prefer workers to finish the same amount ofwork in just four days. This can add more stress to the employee rather thanease their life.
Finally, the professor said that if workersjust work four days instead of five days would inhibit their promotionpossibility for the reason that the manager are prone to let people who cancontribute five days to monitor the others be the manager. It can be sad newsfor the people who put emphasis on the career.



谢谢大神们了。。。。8.26就考试了,不知道该怎么办
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发表于 2012-8-17 01:18:21 | 只看该作者
要考试了独立还是练机经吧
感觉结构上不是特别理想
而且论证太多 举例较少
看看范文的结构吧 多积累 而且first second很死板 换高级一点的
To begin with,subsequently,in sum,等等
加油 hope it helps
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