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[issue] 8.18G issue140 超时3mins。。。。。求批斗。。。

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发表于 2012-8-13 13:02:11 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
140) Some people believe that universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study. Others believe that universities should not force students to take any courses other than those that will help prepare them for jobs in their chosen fields.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.



I concede to the view that it is important for universities to make students take courses which will help their jobs in t future.But theview of taking a variety of courses is still reasonable for a better education. Maybe there is a eclectic way for both of the views.

 Admittedly,the courses leading to jobs are important to student of university. First of all, many students go to university for better jobs in the future. And going to university is a kind of investment for the future. Jobs will finally lead to the economic foundation of the students which will finally solve problems of accommodation,marriage and a high quality life. Secondly, the courses which help students prepare for their jobs provided by the university will make those students on a advantage position. In the competition of jobs. These courses make them more confident and more skilled which may finally let them get those jobs. Finally,when students graduate from the universities,if they can't find a job and have no money to sustain a family,then people will ask the universities what they have educated that make students even homeless. Even when they find jobs finally,if they find that they have learned in universities do not have any help to their jobs,they will in turn question the education of universities. And both of the situations will shake the position of universities in people's mind.

 However,it is not enough for university students to just take courses that will lead to jobs and taking a variety of courses outside their fields will benefit their all-round education. On the one hand,the purpose of university education is not to make students to be qualified workers who can manipulate machines or follow the direction proficiently.Instead,the education of university is responsible to teach students how to think of questions and solve problems on their own.Even on their job position,they will come across problems and what they have to do is think all-round and deal with it. Taking a variety of courses outside their own majors will help them to think of problems in different positions and angles. On the other hand,if university just make students take courses which will help their jobs in the future may be too utilitarian. After graduation, what students have to face is not just job but a variety of things in the society. Taking a variety of courses will help them have a broad knowledge of the whole world and society And this will cultivate all-round individuals for a better development.

 Moreover, it is not rational enough if universities compel students to take a variety of courses outside their own fields. Perhaps some students have difficulty studying their own majors and it is important for them to study those courses which will help their jobs first . If they are compelled to take other courses,it just not worth the candle. Maybe there is a eclectic policy to set up both elective courses and required courses for students to choose. Students have to take those required courses which will help their jobs and for those students who have fulfilled their major courses they should be encouraged to take a variety of other courses they interested.

 In sum,both of the views is reasonable in certain position but they just reflect a side of the university courses. In addition, compulsory actions will not benefit the cultivation of the  studentsand the eclectic policy may be better



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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-13 18:00:47 | 只看该作者
顶起来...
板凳
发表于 2012-8-13 18:15:09 | 只看该作者
concede ?to the view,concede作为及物动词表示承认的意思,所以不必用to了
Maybe there is a eclectic way for both of the views.这是你的立场么?不太具体,而且用了maybe显得很没底气
地板
发表于 2012-8-13 18:22:04 | 只看该作者
the courses leading to jobs ?
First of all, many students go to university for better jobs in the future这句话如果用个强调句型突出下你想表达的意思
Jobs will finally lead to the economic foundation of the students ?lead to 我觉得用contribute to 要好些,另外,of 用for好些
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-13 18:23:07 | 只看该作者
concede ?to the view,concede作为及物动词表示承认的意思,所以不必用to了
Maybe there is a eclectic way for both of the views.这是你的立场么?不太具体,而且用了maybe显得很没底气
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/8/13 18:15:09)


ISSUE中可以把话说得那么绝对么?斑竹其他部分呢?
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发表于 2012-8-13 18:32:09 | 只看该作者
is think all-round?
最后的结尾还是不能看出你的具体的立场,你只是论述了题目中的两个建议的合理和不合理,最后你还要做的是做出一个取舍或者折中
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发表于 2012-8-13 18:34:24 | 只看该作者
concede ?to the view,concede作为及物动词表示承认的意思,所以不必用to了
Maybe there is a eclectic way for both of the views.这是你的立场么?不太具体,而且用了maybe显得很没底气
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/8/13 18:15:09)



ISSUE中可以把话说得那么绝对么?斑竹其他部分呢?
-- by 会员 无愧德意志 (2012/8/13 18:23:07)

必须要有自己的立场,然后自圆其说,不管是否绝对,如果你最后能把一个看似绝对的观点说的很到位很合理,也可以的,本身没有对错好坏之分嘛
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-13 18:35:15 | 只看该作者
is think all-round?
最后的结尾还是不能看出你的具体的立场,你只是论述了题目中的两个建议的合理和不合理,最后你还要做的是做出一个取舍或者折中
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/8/13 18:32:09)


eclectic policy算折中吧?
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发表于 2012-8-13 18:36:11 | 只看该作者
is think all-round?
最后的结尾还是不能看出你的具体的立场,你只是论述了题目中的两个建议的合理和不合理,最后你还要做的是做出一个取舍或者折中
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/8/13 18:32:09)



eclectic policy算折中吧?
-- by 会员 无愧德意志 (2012/8/13 18:35:15)

具体怎么折中的呢
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-13 18:37:24 | 只看该作者
is think all-round?
最后的结尾还是不能看出你的具体的立场,你只是论述了题目中的两个建议的合理和不合理,最后你还要做的是做出一个取舍或者折中
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/8/13 18:32:09)




eclectic policy算折中吧?
-- by 会员 无愧德意志 (2012/8/13 18:35:15)


具体怎么折中的呢
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/8/13 18:36:11)


那岂不是把Moreover 后面关于required和 electic courses的内容再说一遍?
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