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[作文互改] issue44,自觉算是唯一能拿出手的习作了,求狠拍

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发表于 2012-7-30 19:40:25 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.

Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.


The speaker asserts that the present society is hardly willing to accept any living man and woman as hero or heroine for sake of the scrutiny of the media will render the diminishment of people who become their subject. The topic is complex regarding the tricky relationship between mass media and mass opinion. While the speaker regard media as the malefactor that damage the reputation of potential heroes and heroines, I hold the belief that the society is still capable of producing heroic people and mass media is nonetheless one of the contributor to their survival and blossom.


The claim of the speaker is two folds: firstly, the scrutiny of media result in a destructive impact to their subjects, second, because of the diminishing reputation, no living hero or heroine would exist. It might be tempting to agree with the speaker that the close investigation do considerable harm to the subject of media. Obeying the rule of truthfully restoring news, journalists often have an in depth examination of lives of the subjects who achieved heroic deeds. Such information, once revealed, would severely profane their image because that the readers and audience would find that these seemingly heroic people, like anyone else, have a load of shortcomings and mundane morass. Consequently, the heated worship of such heroes and heroines will quickly cool off. Without such reverence and public attention, these subjects lose their attraction to be regarded as hero.


Aside from the foregoing argument, I strongly disagree with the author’s assertion. First of all, living heroes and heroines actually exist in the society. The existence of hero and the reputation of hero are mutually independent. To meet the criteria of hero, one should be highly extolled as people whose specialized talent outstrip others, or whose notable feat have a great moral or historical influence. Given some living heroes have been revealed have some infamous deeds, their outstanding achievements and quality is ineffaceable. The great basketball Michael Jordan is notable as a cruel and ungenerous man to his opponent as well as his teammate, but that scarcely have any negative influence to his heroic image as a peerless champion. Their fames will, in some aspect, get violence by the scrutiny of media, but not their specific regard which is the most important quality to be a hero.


Secondly, it is arbitrary to neglect the positive effect of media in erecting heroes. Heroes and their heroic deeds are timeless attractions to audience. Considering the great profit and fame such news brings to the media, the medium have mountain willingness to put major effort in introducing and publicizing these heroes. In return, being exposed to mass media, the heroes have impressed their image to the audience and readers. Take athletes for example, had it not been the production of mass media, their image can only be caught by audience watching in the stadium so that hardly can their achievements and spirit be impressive to the mass.


Furthermore, the close investigation of heroes will even raise the intimacy between followers and heroes. According to the psychological research, people prefer to trust and reverent figures that have great achievement but commit some lapses to those who appear as perfect. So some fault exposed by the media will conversely have a positive impact to heroes.


In sum, the living hero and heroine have their status in the society because of their achievements and abilities. And the mass media, while sometimes damages the image of heroes in some aspects, plays a wholesome role in building up heroes in the society through their capacity of publicizing.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2012-7-30 20:01:48 | 只看该作者
头次发帖,格式可能有问题,有路过的童鞋也请帮忙指正~
板凳
发表于 2012-7-31 10:27:50 | 只看该作者
我觉得作者英文写作很好,要补充的就是,应该指名英雄有真英雄和假英雄之分,假英雄在媒体面前站不住脚,而真英雄的缺点也可以让英雄更完美。
地板
发表于 2012-7-31 16:10:07 | 只看该作者
感觉这篇写的很不错啊,语言很好,思路也很不错,加油啊PS:附上提纲
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发表于 2012-8-1 16:57:22 | 只看该作者
不知道lz是几分钟写出来的
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发表于 2012-8-1 17:12:06 | 只看该作者
发现一处错误啊,feat应该用复数吧
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发表于 2012-8-1 17:15:07 | 只看该作者
outstrip 应该是第三人称形式
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-4 11:06:05 | 只看该作者
很好的建议,谢谢斑竹~
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-4 11:06:29 | 只看该作者
好的,下次注意!
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-4 11:09:02 | 只看该作者
新手写作,时间没把握好,先练文笔了...
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