各位大侠看看小弟的作文怎么样~~~给点意见~~~~拜谢~~

bazingawang · 发表于 2012-7-25 12:50:58

Do youagree or disagree with the statement that it is not a good thing to move to anew place because you will lose your friends?
求路过的各位大侠都不吝赐教，小弟马上就要考了，感觉语言很无力，求各位点评一下作文~~拜谢~~~

Does moving to anew city necessarily mean you are deleting all your friends from your life andyou have to start it all over again? I am against the statement that moving toa new place loses your friends. My explanations are as follows.
Moving to a new placemeans you have got a totally new environment to explore. It is alwaysfascinating to meet new people, touch new ideas, and try out the things youhave never imagined. As for me myself, I have moved to a new place once, fromBeijing to Nanjing. Beijing is such a big city and the people are always busywith their own affairs. However, Nanjing is a lovely place as far as I amconcerned. I have a fantastic experience in Nanjing. Meeting many new friends, startingmy education in here, I have a great life here thanks to the move.
What is more, movingto a new place may help you forget some unpleasant experience deep in heart. Asa matter of fact, many choose to move away to start a new life. Maybe you havebroken up with your sweetheart and just moving around in the city may bring youinto endless sorrow. In this way, moving away is a smart choice, isn't it?
Admittedly, movingto a new place may separate you from your old friends and the friendshipsomehow suffers more or less. However, I do not think that it is really a bigmatter as the communication tools connect the whole world tight in arms thanksto the development of the technology. Even if you are far away in America, itis still not difficult to see your friends in china through skype, MSN, etc. Inthe light of this, moving to a new place doesn't mean the loss of friends, as amatter of fact, it is the other way around. You can have new friends, developnew friendship, in the meantime, never lose the old ones.
All in all, I amin favor with the idea that moving to a new city can be quite gorgeous!

各位大侠看看小弟的作文怎么样~给点意见拜谢

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