OG12-26 好像是11版没有的… 关于句子重心和which的问题 和一般做题原则矛盾…

26.        Emily Dickinson's letters to Susan Huntington
Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few
years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and
ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886.
outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

(B)         Dickinson were written over a period that begins
a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's
brother and ended shortly before Emily's death
in 1886, outnumber

(C)         Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few
years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother
and that ends shortly before Emily's death in
1886 and outnumbering

(D)          Dickinson, which were written over a period
beginning a few years before Susan's marriage
to Emily's brother, ending shortly before Emily's
death in 1886, and outnumbering

(E)          Dickinson, which were written over a period
beginning a few years before Susan's marriage
to Emily's brother and ending shortly before
Emily's death in 1886, outnumber

这题选E，为什么不选A呢？OG解释说A给了那个时间段太多的emphasis，可是我觉得E的逗号加which错得更明显啊……而且emphasis时间段也没有错啊，如果是这样，反而是E改变了原句的重心，请各位NN解释~~

(D)          Dickinson, which were written over a period
beginning a few years before Susan's marriage
to Emily's brother, ending shortly before Emily's
death in 1886, and outnumbering

(E)          Dickinson, which were written over a period
beginning a few years before Susan's marriage
to Emily's brother and ending shortly before
Emily's death in 1886, outnumber

这题选E，为什么不选A呢？OG解释说A给了那个时间段太多的emphasis，可是我觉得E的逗号加which错得更明显啊……而且emphasis时间段也没有错啊，如果是这样，反而是E改变了原句的重心，请各位NN解释~~

首先 e的逗号肯定没有错 你可以把两个逗号中间全拿掉 直接得到句子主干

这题的关键在于 句子是强调给D的信比给别人的都多 而不是强调给D的信是在什么时候写的

所以E 更合适

当然 我这也是马后炮 实战我要看完原文 肯定直接就选A了 后面的选项我都不会看

这题是GWD里的争议题

其实A E都没有语法错误

最关键是比逻辑意思，A的重心是在说这段时间写了信什么的，ing给了一个结果伴随 outnumbering

E则是说写的这些信，outnumber了别的信。

LZ体会一下意思的差别。

我觉得这是语法中真正的难点，在考试中要能看出一个句子想要真正表达的意思，逻辑意思是王道啊~~~~~~~

是啊！这点很讨厌，考试的时候我跟本没时间去理解句子意思，更不要提体会这种细微差别了……

唉 是啊 看来还是要把选项看完…… 没时间啊没时间

汗个，我也是，当时觉得E重心转移了，不过Which肯定没错啦，因为were也预示了代letters

我觉得是不是可以这样理解这个重心，如果是A，就是说，这些信在~~~时候被写，伴随着的状态是数量超过了以前写得

outcome是实义动词，而were written更像是一种状态