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发表于 2013-8-18 11:36:19 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Theopinion of celebrities, such as certain entertainment and athletes, are moreimportant for younger people than older people.
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1.名人的意见有助于年轻人成功。
2.模仿名人看问题的主张和意见,影响年轻人的世界观。
3.名人的意见有时候对老年人也很重要,比如名人会倡导一些健康的生活方式,老年人接受了能够帮助他们保持健康
     As modernsociety develops, the opinion of celebrities always affects common people. Thisis where controversy rises. Some believe that the opinions of celebrities aremore significant for young people than older people. While others consider thatthe opinion of celebrities has same effect on young and older people. In myperspective, opinions of celebrities are much more important for young peoplethan older people because for young people, these opinions have considerableinfluences on their success and personal style in the future.
     The first reasonI want to put forward here is that the opinions of celebrities haveconsiderable positive effects on success of young people. Celebrities are thepeople who perform excellent in certain field, such as playing tennis orsinging or dancing therefore their opinions for young people in the same fieldare instructive as well as full of summary of their practical experience. Recentlymy cousin got some opinions from a tennis star on how to control tennis ball. Hepractices as the tennis star said, holding his bat firmly and releasing hispower gradually then he enhanced his technique efficiently and gained championin a game. With celebrities’ professional opinions, young people could find a rightorient to improve quickly and be on their way to success.
     Another reason Istrongly support is that inexperienced young people imitate opinions ofcelebrities as models therefore the opinions they learn may shape their world views.One of my friends admires famous actress Audrey Hepburn who has enthusiasm oncharity and is full of love. Hepburn’s opinion is that she wants to help childrenwho suffer for poverty all over the world and accepted by my friend. She nowalso tried to assist children who can’t afford to school because she proposesthat we have responsibility to give a hand to people who are in rough time. Through my friend’s example, I fully understand the celebrities’ opinions couldinfluence the view of young people considerably because they are young people’smodels all the time.
     Though important for young people, we couldn’t deny that opinions’ of celebrities sometimes areof significance for older people. Some celebrities promote healthy life style,for instance, organic food as well as cooking with less oil and fat. Theirpromotion and opinions of health life have strikingly impact on the life styleof older people. My grandfather watches a program regularly in which stars fromdifferent field introduce their healthy recipes. And then my grandfather acceptstheir healthy cooking opinions making less fat but high vitamin dishes.Moreover he follows star’s opinions trying some healthy food he didn’t like toeat, such as yogurt. Those healthy opinions of celebrities give my grandfathera healthy guide to choose a better eating style which is positive to theirhealth.
     In conclusion,opinions of celebrities are more important for young people than older peoplebecause they could be guiding young people to success and help them developtheir views of world which have long term effect on young people’s whole life.

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