GWD SC 問題

treewing929 · 发表于 2012-2-28 16:49:36

Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.

A.while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B.compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C.whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D.whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E.compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent

請問答案是 D?
謝!!!

清飞扬 · 发表于 2012-2-29 00:41:57

C 吧，C最平行了

AE的it指代都有问题，你说不清楚这个it到底指代谁，先行词很多
B。Germany, which uses just over 33 percent，which修饰Germany，两边意思不对称了，前半句是说produce，后半句compared比较的是uses，消耗

能够迷惑人的只有CD
C.whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D.whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany

咬住平行点就行了
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power----energy 在什么地方被Produce，energy来自nuclear power

C表达正确，-energy 在什么地方被Produce，energy来自nuclear power
D不平行，nuclear power in Germany，前半句对nuclear power可没有in some place来平行对应

SC的句子很有平行的美的。别被“硬平行，假平行”迷惑

treewing929 · 发表于 2012-2-29 06:18:47

明白了! 謝謝你!!

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