我做的新版的是
A consortium of historically Black colleges in the United States capitalizing on such schools traditionally rich relationships with African nations, integrates African concerns into an international business study. A. capitalizing on such school’ traditionally rich relationships with African nations B. while capitalizing on the traditionally rich relationships of such schools and African nations C. through capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’ traditionally rich relationships D. which capitalize on the traditionally rich relationships of such schools and African nations E. in capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’ traditionally rich relationship
也不对,那个逗号把主谓分开,啥跟啥啊,要改也要把逗号去掉或者在capitalizing前面也加上逗号 改成
A consortium of historically Black colleges in the United States, capitalizing on such schools traditionally rich relationships with African nations, integrates African concerns into an international business study. A. capitalizing on such school’ traditionally rich relationships with African nations B. while capitalizing on the traditionally rich relationships of such schools and African nations C. through capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’ traditionally rich relationships D. which capitalize on the traditionally rich relationships of such schools and African nations E. in capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’ traditionally rich relationship 或者 A consortium of historically Black colleges in the United States capitalizing on such schools traditionally rich relationships with African nations integrates African concerns into an international business study. A. capitalizing on such school’ traditionally rich relationships with African nations B. while capitalizing on the traditionally rich relationships of such schools and African nations C. through capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’ traditionally rich relationships D. which capitalize on the traditionally rich relationships of such schools and African nations E. in capitalizing on such schools’ and African nations’ traditionally rich relationship
这样我就支持选A了
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