求教这段话对吗？

mike125615212 · 发表于 2012-3-18 00:51:48

再比如这个句子(GWD-29-24)：According to recentstudies comparing the nutritional value of meat from wild animals and meat fromdomesticated animals, wild animals have less total fat than (that of) livestockfed on grain and more of a kind of fat thought to be good for cardiac health. 这个句子不对。其在livestock前加上that of…比较的对象是animalshas less fat和that，that指代fat，而事实上比较的应该是wildanimals和livestock的属性，即拥有fat的多少，所以than后面也应该用平行的句式，即主谓宾形式。正确句子为：According to recent studies comparing thenutritional value of meat from wild animals and meat from domesticated animals,wild animals have less total fat than livestock fed on grain and more of a kindof fat thought to be good for cardiac health.。要注意的一点：在此省略了相同的谓语和宾语（因为不会有wildanimals have livestock的歧义，只要逻辑上基本成立，GMAT并不认为所有没有补出谓语动词的形式都是”ambiguities”的）。（原句不对的另外一个证据：more of a kind of fat 后面省略了(than…)，而省略的部分应该和less total fatthan后面的词句是一致的，这样才能省略?逻辑上看省略的必须是livestock，而不能是that oflivestock，因此less total fat than后面跟的也应该是livestock。）

HarrisZheng · 发表于 2012-3-18 04:23:30

亮瞎了我的眼啊

我觉得正确的句子应该这样写

According to recent studies comparing the nutritional value of meat from wild animals WITH THAT OF meat from domesticated animals, wild animals have less total fat and more of a kind of fat thought to be good for cardiac health than have livestock fed on grain.
(compare A with B , or compare A to B, meat前面的that of 不可省，是value和value的比较，不能value 比meat )
livestock 的谓语可不补

求教这段话对吗？

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