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dedeyuky · 发表于 2011-9-10 18:50:38

Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(A) Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(B) Added to the increase in hourly wages which had been requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(C) The railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July.
(D) In addition to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(E) In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

答案选E。我想问问D错在哪了？

Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(A) Added to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(B) Added to the increase in hourly wages which had been requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(C) The railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits added to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July.
(D) In addition to the increase in hourly wages that were requested last July, the railroad employees are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.
(E) In addition to the increase in hourly wages requested last July, the employees of the railroad are now seeking an expanded program of retirement benefits.

答案选E。我想问问D错在哪了？

wildmantomba · 发表于 2012-1-9 13:57:45

与E相较下 D较不简洁
-ed分词做后置定语优于定语从句

1014780305 · 发表于 2012-1-9 14:10:37

没有其它错误时，名词的修饰，如果只有一个形容词（或者过去分词作形容词），只能用直接定语，不能用定语从句。

ethanli · 发表于 2012-1-9 17:01:29

were 应该是was 吧

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