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zww8169 · 发表于 2011-12-24 05:42:19

the city's decay stems from governmental mismanagement, increasing unemployment, and many businesses are relocating.

correction: the city's decay stems from governmental mismanagement, increasing unemployment, and business relocation.

但可不可以把 business relocation 改为 relocating businesses

HarrisZheng · 发表于 2012-1-2 23:51:54

不可以

注意这三个平行的中心词 mismanagement unemployment relocation

P106 1 parallelism

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