求帮忙改个很小的作文两段

Nanjing11 · 发表于 2011-12-24 16:17:25

谢谢了
Cross-cultural communication has crept into our lives with the development of the society and the globalization of economics. We had better gain more understanding of cross-culture communication, which would benefit us a lot in our daily life.

There’s no denying that different countries have different regulations in daily communication because people from all over the world share varieties of customs and culture and follow their own ethics in action. Therefore, to appreciate and firstly to respect their culture is vital for us when communicate each other.

In addition, culture communication is vital to young people nowadays. It offers us a different point when we view some problems and also has great influence on our thoughts. We can obtain more resources with more approaches if we have a good understanding of cross-culture communication, which may also save us lots of time when we are seeking another solution for a certain problem. It also renders us more communication with foreign people from all over the world with their viewpoint and helps us appreciate the beauty of the world from a different standpoint.

竹林中人 · 发表于 2011-12-24 16:31:47

economics，经济学，建议这个地方就用economy
communicate each other ，需要with吧
vital 多次用到，建议多进行同义词的变换，以免显得单一
We can obtain more resources with more approaches if we have a good understanding of cross-culture communication, which may also save us lots of time when we are seeking another solution for a certain problem，这种长句不建议用。

Nanjing11 · 发表于 2011-12-24 16:38:48

We can obtain more resources with more approaches if we have a good understanding of cross-culture communication, which may also save us lots of time when we are seeking another solution for a certain problem.

求帮忙改个很小的作文两段

不建议用的长句要怎么改呢

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