need some help with these verbal questions, thank you!!

keepmeposted · 发表于 2011-12-16 15:24:54

1 (The Unite4d States minted about 857 million silver-colored Susan B Anthony dollars between 1979 and 1981, but the coin) proved unpopular because it looked and felt too much like a quarter.

correct: The Unite4d States minted about 857 million silver-colored Susan B Anthony dollars between 1979 and 1981, but the coin

wrong: Between 1979 and 1981 the united states minted about 857 million silver0colored susan b Anthony dollars, which
why is this wrong?

2 After several years of rapid growth, the health care company became one of the largest health care providers in the metropolitan area, (wile it then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its payment to )doctors and hospitals.

wrong: But then it proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in its paying

why is this wrong?

correct: But then proved unable to handle the increase in business, falling months behind in paying

3 (Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted ) in the stride-piano tradition of willie smith and duke ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

why are these wrong?
Thelonious monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced body of work that was rooted both

Jass pianist and compser thelonious monk, who produced a body of work rooted

Jazz pianist and composer thelonious monk produced body of work rooted both

correct:
Jazz pianist and composer thelonious monk produced a body of work that was rooted

HarrisZheng · 发表于 2011-12-19 19:30:42

1. which指代dollars, 和未划线部分的it不匹配

2 it指代不明 metropolitan area也是单数

3 第一句 both in后面就要and in 正确用法 in both。。。and
第二句不是一个完整的句子
第三句同第一句

need some help with these verbal questions, thank you!!

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