GWD-6-Q31我有新看法，大家进来看看

黄宋菠菜 · 发表于 2011-11-28 16:36:09

（1） GWD-6-Q31:The fact of some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly andothers looking quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlookedfeature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably on a spectrumof genetic relatedness.

The fact of [CH1] some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably

That some fraternal twins resemble each other greatly while others look quite dissimilar highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely that they vary considerably

With some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar, it [CH2] highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely considerable variation

With some fraternal twins resembling each other greatly and others looking quite dissimilar, it is a fact that highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely a considerable variation[CH3]

Because some fraternal twins resemble each other greatly and others look quite dissimilar, this fact highlights an interesting and often overlooked feature of fraternal-twin pairs, namely they vary considerably[CH4]
[CH1]应该用that不用of，强调整体，作fact的同位语

[CH2]指代不清，没有后置的主语从句

[CH3]改变了句意，with里的词是修饰fact的，it作形式主语，指代后面的that从句

[CH4]没有连接词，run-on句子

上面说d项it指代有问题，我觉得不对啊，这是强调句好像，it不指代任何东西啊，大家觉得呢？

黄宋菠菜 · 发表于 2011-11-28 19:24:02

黄宋菠菜 · 发表于 2011-11-29 10:27:47

黄宋菠菜 · 发表于 2011-11-29 15:00:50

太弱智了吗

demorgan · 发表于 2011-12-19 10:23:06

一点不弱，同问

GWD-6-Q31我有新看法，大家进来看看

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