OG SC NO.71

寂寞的自由 · 发表于 2004-2-4 04:22:00

The original building and loan associations wer organized as limited life funds, whose members made monthly payments on their share subscriptions, then taking turns drawing on the funds for home mortgages.
D) subscriptions and then took turns, they drew
E) subscriptions and then drew, taking turns.

自由的疑问是：我自己的理由可以驳倒D和E，但是OG给出的解释同我的思路不同。因为自由想弄透ETS的SC思路，所以请教大家，谢谢
OG: the wording in D results in a run-on sentence and does not specify what the members took turns doing. Similarly,E does not specify what the members drew, and taking turns produces nonsense when combined with the rest of the sentence.
请大家帮忙解释一下我上面的OG的解释含义，还有什么叫做： a run-on sentence呢？！谢谢大家

2love2live · 发表于 2004-2-6 00:27:00

run on sentence - 就是感觉句子意思还没结束

寂寞的自由 · 发表于 2004-2-6 03:35:00

谢谢您的解释！

ecsniffer · 发表于 2004-2-6 09:20:00

非也。
run on sectence是指两个句子直接并列中间没有连词连接。

terp · 发表于 2004-2-6 09:35:00

Agree with ecsniffer.

2love2live · 发表于 2004-2-6 10:55:00

勘误！！

自由兄对不住了，我想当然的解释错了，谢谢terp, ecsniffer,

请看：
http://webster.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm

irenelj78 · 发表于 2004-7-16 04:50:00

wow!2love2live，你提供的这个网站不错哦，谢谢，受益！！！

hpp920 · 发表于 2004-7-16 05:12:00

我可以贡献一点,摘抄英文书上的: A sentence with too much in it is a run-on. There are two varieties of run-on sentence: the comma splice and the true run-on.

The comma splice occurs when two complete sentences are joined together, with only a comma between them.

hpp920 · 发表于 2004-7-16 11:59:00

俺画蛇添足了,上面的网站很详细

OG SC NO.71

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