Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena’s father, and giants.
A.Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
B.Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which to dress
C.According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress
D.Records from ancient Athens indicate that each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe with which they dressed
E.Records from ancient Athens indicate each year young Athenian women had collaborated to weave a new woolen robe for dressing
句子结构是这样 Records…indicate that… women collaborated… with which they… and that this robe…
According to records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress 这里面and前后的两个部分平行,后面的还原之后即是:a new woolen robe that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena’s father, and giants. 不可原谅的重复。。。
1,句首主谓搭配错误:如A,B,年轻的雅典女人based...是错误的。 2,each year用过去完成时是错误的,如E中,一般过去时是对的。 3,a...robe that they used to dress:used to 本身是个固定搭配,表示过去经常做的事情,现在不做了。用在这里,容易使意思含糊,所以舍弃这个结构,如在C当中,另外,according to没问题的。
AB:based修饰women,意思不合逻辑;
C:选项部分本身没问题,但是看后面"and that this robe depicted "和前面接起来变成“...to weave a new woolen robe that this robe depicted...",显然重复了一遍"this robe"
D:在这个选项中后面的"that this robe..."是和前面的"indicate that..."平行的,不存在C所述的重复问题了,是indicate that... and that... 结构。
E:首先indicate少了that就很不好,未划线部分的that也没有平行对象;然后each year后面接had done也很不好;然后for doing也不太好。