请教A，B，C，and D，and E这种表达法正确吗？

xyc19901015 · 发表于 2011-8-17 22:43:42

Developed by Pennsylvania's Palatine Germans about 1750, they made Conestoga wagons with
high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats, and the nonroads of the prairie and they
had a floor curved upward on either end so as to prevent cargo from shifting on steep grades.
(A) they made Conestoga wagons with high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats,
and the nonroads of the prairie and they had a floor curved upward on either end so as to prevent
(B) they made Conestoga wagons, which had high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy
flats, and the nonroads of the prairie, and floors curved upward on their ends so that they prevented
(C) Conestoga wagons, with high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats, and the
nonroads of the prairie, and had a floor that was curved upward at both ends to prevent
(D) Conestoga wagons had high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats, and the
nonroads of the prairie, and a floor that was curved upward at both ends to prevent
(E) Conestoga wagons had high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats, and the
nonroads of the prairie and floors curving upward at their ends so that it prevented

这道题答案是D，这里的rutted roads, muddy flats,nonroads和最后的floor是平行的吗？如果是的话，floor前可以加and？请大牛指导！

sandychen168 · 发表于 2011-8-17 22:57:13

不是平行。
D。Conestoga wagons had high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats, and the nonroads of the prairie, and a floor that was curved upward at both ends to prevent

把意思理顺就知道了，主干是，wagons had high wheels.......and a floor that....

xyc19901015 · 发表于 2011-8-17 23:42:38

嗯嗯，看清楚了~

清飞扬 · 发表于 2011-8-18 09:54:12

Developed by Pennsylvania's Palatine Germans about 1750, they made Conestoga wagons with
high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats, and the nonroads of the prairie and they
had a floor curved upward on either end so as to prevent cargo from shifting on steep grades.
(A) they made Conestoga wagons with high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats,==>逻辑主语成了they，不能很好的表达who developed，所以逻辑主语秒数不清
and the nonroads of the prairie and they had a floor curved upward on either end so as to prevent
(B) they made Conestoga wagons, which had high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy
flats, and the nonroads of the prairie, and floors curved upward on their ends so that they prevented ,==>逻辑主语成了they，不能很好的表达who developed，所以逻辑主语秒数不清

(C) Conestoga wagons, with high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats, and the
nonroads of the prairie, and had a floor that was curved upward at both ends to prevent==>逻辑主语对了，但是去掉插入句变成Conestoga wagons and had a floor that was curved upward at both ends to prevent，错误
(D) Conestoga wagons had high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats, and the
nonroads of the prairie, and a floor that was curved upward at both ends to prevent==>看起来没有问题
(E) Conestoga wagons had high wheels capable of crossing rutted roads, muddy flats, and the
nonroads of the prairie and floors curving upward at their ends so that it prevented==>我最怕的就是句子结尾有代词：their/it容易指代不清，但是具体题目还是要具体分析。这道题是指代不清

so it's D

请教A，B，C，and D，and E这种表达法正确吗？

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