是用句子还是现在分词？

victorbj262 · 发表于 2010-6-9 23:35:00

In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

   for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve

   for attracting females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, which can in fact serve

   in attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving

   to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and it can in fact serve （答案）

   to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving

为什么E不对呢？

canols · 发表于 2010-6-10 08:18:52

1. "possibly" has a different meaning from "can"
2. it is "the number of chirps xxx" that "serve" xxx, not the action of "rises and falls"

In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve

for attracting females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, which can in fact serve

in attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving

to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and it can in fact serve （答案）

to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving

为什么E不对呢？

-- by 会员 victorbj262 (2010/6/9 23:35:00)

红尘道士 · 发表于 2010-6-10 11:08:18

我觉得用现在分词，意思上也是可以的，但是现在分词是句子的简化形式，他在某些简单情况下可用，并不是所有的句子都适合简化为现在分词形式，像本例，还要表达can，或者possible的情态动词，就不适合简化为分词结构了

silent7706 · 发表于 2010-6-10 12:38:34

I would take E) it were written as "possibly serving".
In addition, "in fact possibly serving" is awkward and change the original meaning.

highgmatcwj · 发表于 2010-6-11 22:57:30

1. "possibly" has a different meaning from "can"
2. it is "the number of chirps xxx" that "serve" xxx, not the action of "rises and falls"

In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve

for attracting females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, which can in fact serve

in attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving

to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and it can in fact serve （答案）

to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving

为什么E不对呢？

-- by 会员 victorbj262 (2010/6/9 23:35:00)

-- by 会员 canols (2010/6/10 8:18:52)

非常靠谱

xsforever · 发表于 2011-7-28 22:53:02

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