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引夕 · 发表于 2011-7-14 15:25:44

According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidencethat the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come in for a “soft landing,” followed by a gradual increase in business activity.
(A) that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come
(B) in the economy to avoid the recession, what many feared earlier in the year, rather to come
(C) in the economy’s ability to avoid the recession, something earlier in the year many had feared, and instead to come
(D) in the economy to avoid the recession many were fearing earlier in the year, and rather to come
(E) that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared earlier this year by many, with it instead coming
正确答案 A
很多人问过，已经知道各选项的错误之处了，就想问一下为什么C D 中后面的to come不行呢？OG中说会破坏后面句子的完整性……木有太明白= =，不能看做和前面to avoid的平行吗？
求教~

塔罗牌 · 发表于 2011-7-14 15:59:31

如果后面一定要跟也是instead of吧没有见过instead to
而且instead本来也可以是一个adv 表示反而却后面是可以什么都不用跟的

nemiah · 发表于 2011-7-14 16:04:17

我觉得平行应该不是问题。

关键是confidence in the economy to avoid ... and to come in ... 这样结构不好。其实这个类似那种 because of sb doing sth 的错误。其实它是把两个句话合并为一个了。因为我可以理解avoid and come 的主语是 market 而不是economy 对吧？所以还是用that从句把主语明确出来较好。除非这样说 confidence in the economy that the economy will avoid and come in... .

另外，economy's ability 这种用法也不好吧。。。

引夕 · 发表于 2011-7-14 16:42:45

哦哦～了解了～感谢～

mongmong · 发表于 2011-7-26 20:13:59

og没有说是“破坏”完整性，是说这些用法不idiomatic

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