求教一道GWD的题，非常感谢

Maggie草 · 发表于 2011-3-22 22:13:04

Most insomnia is not an illness or a physical condition so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a reaction to certain medications, anxiety about travel, or stress before a job interview.

an illness or a physical condition so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a reaction to certain medications
an illness or a physical condition so much as symptomatic of another problem that may be a simple one, like a reaction caused by certain medications
so much an illness or a physical condition but a symptom of another problem that may be as simple as when certain medications cause a reaction
so much an illness or a physical condition, but it is a symptom of another problem, maybe a simple one like certain medications causing a reaction
so much an illness or a physical condition but symptomatic of another problem, maybe simply a reaction to certain medications

GJane · 发表于 2011-3-22 22:19:41

选A对么？

mbacn02 · 发表于 2011-3-23 04:14:37

sdfzcjy · 发表于 2011-3-23 10:02:57

Most insomnia is not an illness or a physical condition so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a reaction to certain medications, anxiety about travel, or stress before a job interview.

an illness or a physical condition so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a reaction to certain medications

an illness or a physical condition so much as symptomatic of another problem that may be a simple one, like a reaction caused by certain medications

so much an illness or a physical condition but a symptom of another problem that may be as simple as when certain medications cause a reaction

so much an illness or a physical condition, but it is a symptom of another problem, maybe a simple one like certain medications causing a reaction

so much an illness or a physical condition but symptomatic of another problem, maybe simply a reaction to certain medications

-- by 会员 Maggie草 (2011/3/22 22:13:04)

选E

这题目的意思是insomnia不仅仅是一种病，而且还是一个什么..而AB的意思说insomnia不是一种病，语意不对干掉。
CDE感觉E的歧义最小，思路最清晰最没有疑惑，不需要让读者反复琢磨指示代词的指代对象，所以选E

geegee · 发表于 2011-3-23 11:49:33

我觉得选e,anxiety , or stress 都是名词，所以a reaction是合适的。所以c的when,d的a simple one like(like不合适，太口语话）不合适。

geegee · 发表于 2011-3-23 11:58:36

A:so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a
很冗长，而且so much位置不对。

Maggie草 · 发表于 2011-3-23 17:54:38

能具体说说C,D哪儿不对么？我觉得C在形式上就很对称呀，而且意思的话读着差不多

sdfzcjy · 发表于 2011-3-23 18:32:52

(C)so much an illness or a physical condition but a symptom of another problem that may be as simple as when certain medications cause a reaction

(D)so much an illness or a physical condition, but it is a symptom of another problem, maybe a simple one like certain medications causing a reaction

(E)so much an illness or a physical condition but symptomatic of another problem, maybe simply a reaction to certain medications

尽量减少疑惑，使句子简洁清晰，红色的地方表示需要思考，或者不简洁，而绿色的地方需要与后面的anxiety about travel, or stress before a job interview.相对应，感觉E的形式优于C/D

cassie柚子蜜 · 发表于 2011-3-23 18:48:21

答案不是C么？

Maggie草 · 发表于 2011-3-25 12:07:04

答案貌似是E

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