88. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory. (A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted (B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both (C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted (D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted (E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both
刚才查了查两个人名的资料,主角的作品来源于他们,而他们是一个领域且同是tradition,而ETS给出的解释是主角作品的only one point is being made,所以不能用both,俺的理解是,因为那两个人都是tradition, 所以ETS判断主角的作品only one point is being made,再在此基础上认为不能用both。 俺的理解,both不用是因为两个人名是同一个tradition,both多余。 ETS认为,both不用是只表现了主角作品的一个方面,rooted 及后面的词是修饰a body of work…… 但俺还是不明白,ETS为什么认为who...; the jazz...不简洁?~~~