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Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.

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2道GWD争议题+1道GWD,求高手指教,多谢

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发表于 2011-6-21 20:26:17 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
GWD-9-Q1

A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer’s Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man.



A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison

C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man

E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright’s Native Son and Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man

    我看这题解析说B和E有争议;但是E中用了being,不是说例外是只有被动语态进行时才可能使用,否则其他都错的吗?而且one前面没有only,所以ever written不是应该修饰three best novels的吗?那么三本书就应该是black Americans而不是一个美国人写了啊?


GWD-9-Q3:

Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.



A.Because of wireless service costs plummeting in the last year, and as mobile phones are increasingly common, many people

B.As the cost of wireless service plummeted in the last year and as mobile phones became increasingly common, many people

C.In the last year, with the cost of wireless service plummeting, and mobile phones have become increasingly common, there are many people

D.With the cost of wireless service plummeting in the last year and mobile phones becoming increasingly common, many people are

E.While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are

        解析说D和E倾向于E,因为有while表转折的意思,但是E里面使用了完成时的时态。。。。。小弟认为D选项用with...的结构不合适啊???


GWD-9-Q31:

The current economic downturn has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals as well as general consumer magazines, especially if focusing on technology.



A.has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals as well as general consumer magazines, especially if focusing

B.has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals and for general consumer magazines, especially those focusing

C.significantly reduced advertising income for both business journals and for general consumer magazines, especially when focused

D.reduced both business journals’ and general consumer magazines’ advertising income significantly, especially if focused

E.reduced advertising income significantly for both business journals, as well as for general consumer magazines, especially those focusing


        这题小弟错了,答案是B,小弟选的D,不理解D为什么错了呢?那么B选项里最后那个 those是指代journals 还是指代magazines呢?难道不会指代不明吗???
        谢谢高手指教!!!
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发表于 2011-6-21 21:13:50 | 只看该作者
两个争议题。。。。依旧争议。。。。个人倾向于B和E。。。。

最后一道:ACE 都知道的both and  略
B focusing 这个if条件句是对就近的magazines做的条件,magazines especially those focusing on blablabla.., 意为:商业期刊,大众消费者杂志(尤其是聚焦于科技的那些)

D 先不说用法: reduce both A's and B's C 有wordy问题,

单看整个句子:Downturn reduced O,especially if focused on tech
变成修饰主语或整体句子了
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2011-6-21 21:27:24 | 只看该作者
多谢高手指点!!!!
地板
发表于 2011-6-21 22:04:22 | 只看该作者
第一题请注意主语的小平行,某某人's 书名,前后一致,故选E.
另by一个美国黑人和by一群黑人没有实质区别,前者可补充修饰one,后者可补充修饰three best novels

最后题,表“是否”的意思正确项永远会用whether...
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发表于 2011-6-22 10:48:18 | 只看该作者
GWD-9-Q31:
把prep08语法笔记的贴过来,我觉得讲得蛮清楚

选项分析:
(A) and前后的分句结构都不完整;because of和as不平行对称;because of后面核心词只有costs,无法表达出完整含义,awkward。
(B) 缺少主谓成分,句子结构不完整;in the last year通常与现在完成时搭配;未划线部分的provide用的是一般现在时,则as mobile phones became increasingly common中,became应该用一般现在时;两个as引导的原因状语从句并列
(C) and前后成分不平行;and后面句子run-on的错误;此处there be句型不及主谓结构更有效,wordy;in the last year提前,从仅修饰the cost of wireless service plummeted变为修饰整句话,造成逻辑错误
(D) Correct;with可以表示原因,与as含义相似(见补充说明);注意become和increasingly并不重复,increasingly只是表达了more and more的含义,become与more常搭配使用
(E) while引导的从句要与主句发生在同一时间,可是wireless service has plummeted与主句不是同一时间发生的,用while错误,而且用as表示原因或伴随更为合适
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-6-22 15:38:10 | 只看该作者
谢谢,所以美女你倾向于选择E咯?
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-6-22 15:39:04 | 只看该作者
错了,是D
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-6-22 15:45:17 | 只看该作者
你说的没错,但是小弟觉得还有一个并列结构,就是破折号前面所说的:novels written by black Americans,那么破折号后面的内容是不是用...by...这样更好呢?
谢谢指教
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