我做这一题的时候倒没有分析得这么细。
Shoppers in sportinggoods stores, unlike (要求对称,需要是人) in department stores, do very little impulse shopping,not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball,but they leave with a basketball only A. in department stores (不对称), do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave witha basketball only (not buying, but they leave结构错误,不对称) B. in department stores (不对称), shop impulsively very little; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not also buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well (also多余,或者as well 多余) C. those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy apair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball (后面的do和but leave是属于对impulse shopping的解释,不能用do, do, but平行;这平行结构也错了,肯定用do, do, and do;否定用not do, do, or do) D. those in departmentstores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well (我觉得as well也多余,不过没有别的选项错的明显;赵丽语法说and also,and as well都属于有弱重复意味的。不过我觉得要是把also 和as well放在一起那就肯定重复错了) E. department stores (不对称), shop impulsively very little; someone will not buy apair of skis and a boomerang when they (单复数错误) come in for a basketball but will leavewith only a basketball
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