Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists,was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.
Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style （were influential on generations of bluegrass artists. was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own）. (A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from (B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from (C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to (D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to (E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of 我觉得B选项的谓语动词influenced和inspired 之间是不是缺少一个连词and啊？表示2个动词的并列？请大牛指教
恩~这个正确句子的成分应该是：Bluegrass musicianBill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own. 红色部分是主句主干，黄色部分是从句，其他的是主句的修饰成分 从句中的主干又是蓝色字体标出来的那部分 两个逗号之间的部分是插入语，补充说明repertory的，可以不看
恩~这个正确句子的成分应该是：Bluegrass musicianBill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own. 红色部分是主句主干，黄色部分是从句，其他的是主句的修饰成分 从句中的主干又是蓝色字体标出来的那部分 两个逗号之间的部分是插入语，补充说明repertory的，可以不看
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