?T-4-Q39 ?Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing.
A.Five hundred million different species of living creatures have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them vanishing. B.Nearly 99 percent of five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth have vanished. C.Vanished are nearly 99percent of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that appeared on Earth. D.Of five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent of them have vanished. E.Of the five hundred million different species of living creatures that have appeared on Earth, nearly 99 percent have vanished.
(B)我认为有两个问题。第一就是主语和谓语离的太远了,使得句子变的拖沓。第二,five hundred million different species of living creatures前面应该有定冠词the表特指,特指creatures that have appeared on Earth。
(B)我认为有两个问题。第一就是主语和谓语离的太远了,使得句子变的拖沓。第二,five hundred million different species of living creatures前面应该有定冠词the表特指,特指creatures that have appeared on Earth。