12. Traveling the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were armed only with an Edison phonograph and insatiable curiosity.
(A) Traveling the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were armed only句子不紧凑,不是独立的两句,而是主从关系
(B) In 1905, Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály, traveling the back roads of Hungary, began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were only armed句子不紧凑,不是独立的两句,而是主从关系
(C) In 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, traveling the back roads of Hungary armed only
(D) Having traveled the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology; they were only armed句子不紧凑,不是独立的/时态错(C)
(E) Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály, in 1905 began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, traveling the back roads of Hungary, arming themselves onlyarming逻辑主语错
Choices A and B are wordy and imprecise: the phrasing suggests that Bartok and Kodaly were already traveling the back roads of Hungary when they began their pioneering work, not that they traveled the back roads in order to conduct such work. (???)Moreover, and suggests in both cases that they were armed with a phonograph in addition to being on the road, rather than while they were on the road, (两个分句说明两个动词是独立的,而不是同时发生的)and only in B is misplaced before the verb armed. (only的位置)Choice C is correct. In choice D, Having traveled… suggests that the two had finished traveling before they began their work in ethnomusicology, (时态错,导致意思错)and only is again misplaced. Choice E is wordy and awkwardly constructed. (笨拙)The question is a little easier than the average.
1.the phrasing suggests that Bartok and Kodaly were already traveling the back roads of Hungary when they began their pioneering work, not that they traveled the back roads in order to conduct such work. (???)
OG的解释是什么意思啊
2 答案C中 traveling the back roads of Hungary armed only
armed前要加个and吧 不然会有修饰Hungary的嫌疑
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