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alicejingli · 发表于 2010-12-10 09:54:02

According to some analysts, the gains in the stock market reflect growing confidence that the economy will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in the year and instead come in for a "soft landing", followed by a gradual increase in business activity.

A. 上题划线

B. in the economy to avoid the recession, what many feareed earlier in the year, rather to come

C. in the economy's abbility to avoid the recession, something earlier in the year many had feared, and instead to come

D. in the economy to avoid the recession many were fearing earlier in the year, and rather to come

E. that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared earlier this year by many, with it instead coming
我想问B中OG的指导：rather to come不完整，那具体可以怎样改就完整了？

alicejingli · 发表于 2010-12-14 17:39:04

自顶

mudiduange · 发表于 2010-12-14 18:21:40

前面的according to , 中间的what是插入语和后面的followed by都可以去掉，去掉之后句子是：
the gains （in the stock market） reflect growing confidence （ in the economy to avoid the recession rather to come in for a "soft landing"）

1、掉了一个than
2、后面的一长串结构是修饰confidence, 用that定语从句修饰最简单，也最清晰

上面这句子即使简化后，读起来也怪怪的

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