一个平行的句子，那位NN帮我看看我的分析对不对？

wilincl9321 · 发表于 2012-8-21 13:28:55

The train would be a fixed linear system, and we live in a world that is spreading out in all directions and in which consumers choose the free-wheel systems。

”we live in a world that is spreading out in all directions“ 跟“ （省略we live in a world） in which consumers choose the free-wheel systems。”平行

The train would be a fixed linear system跟 we live in a world that is spreading out in all directions and in which consumers choose the free-wheel systems。平行

wilincl9321 · 发表于 2012-8-22 00:46:28

UP!没人能帮一下忙吗？跪谢了！

PS:上面的是一个正确的句子
如果按我这种分析法，按《曼哈顿》里说的平行， in which 是否应该换成that?

采诗 · 发表于 2012-8-22 02:41:21

Which代替world做状语，that引导的是定语从句，不可替代

wilincl9321 · 发表于 2012-8-22 04:58:12

Which代替world做状语，that引导的是定语从句，不可替代

-- by 会员采诗 (2012/8/22 2:41:21)

哦，谢谢！也就是说这句话的平行层次就是按我说的那样？

keithyang926 · 发表于 2012-8-22 10:36:57

The train would be a fixed linear system, and we live in a world that is spreading out in all directions and in which consumers choose the free-wheel systems。

”we live in a world that is spreading out in all directions“ 跟“ （省略we live in a world） in which consumers choose the free-wheel systems。”平行

The train would be a fixed linear system跟 we live in a world that is spreading out in all directions and in which consumers choose the free-wheel systems。平行

-- by 会员 wilincl9321 (2012/8/21 13:28:55)

这句话如果按照manhattan上面说的rule就是错的，因为这里用that从句跟in which平行，需要将in which 也转成that.

Ex. The train would be a fixed linear system, and we live in a world that is spreading out in all directions and that leads consumers to choose the free-wheel systems。

楼主说这个句子是正确的，能否把原始的题目完整贴出来？这样可以有更具体和针对性的分析。

采诗 · 发表于 2012-8-23 00:59:40

Which代替world做状语，that引导的是定语从句，不可替代

-- by 会员采诗 (2012/8/22 2:41:21)

哦，谢谢！也就是说这句话的平行层次就是按我说的那样？

-- by 会员 wilincl9321 (2012/8/22 4:58:12)

The train would be a fixed linear system, and we live in a world that is spreading out in all directions and in which consumers choose the free-wheel systems。

这里的两个and没有parallel的关系，and在这里只起到connect的作用。原句是一个and连接的两个主句：
1. The train would be a fixed linear system
2. We live in a world

World之后跟两个从句修饰world，进一步解释live in what kind of world，1）the world is spreading out in all directions; 2) in this world, consumers choose the free-wheel systems. 同样是两个语义上不从在并列关系的成分。

且两个从句主语不同，第一个主语是world，所以用that引导的定语从句修饰，第二个主语是consumers，in this world只是做状语，用that会歪曲愿意而且，用that的话，cosummer没地方搁了。

语法最终要服从语义的表达

一个平行的句子，那位NN帮我看看我的分析对不对？

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