再问OG12 121 我晕啊。。（已解决）

天使追梦 · 发表于 2010-9-10 01:44:49

121. Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they
began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked
moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of
red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

(A) they began to grow again after the 1991 report
that linked moderate consumption of alcohol,
and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk
of heart disease
(B) after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk
of heart disease with a moderate alcohol
consumption, particularly red wine, they began
growing again
(C) in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol
consumption, and particularly of red wine, which
was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease,
caused them to begin to grow again
(D) with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in
a 1991 report with moderate alcohol
consumption, in particular red wine, they
began growing again
(E) a reduced risk of heart disease linked to
moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report,
and in particular red wine, started them growing
again

答案是A

1、A中那个and问什么会出现？
2、C中which不可以跳跃指代吗？看了解释，我给自己的解释是只有当谓语表明它指不了最近的的时候，才可以跳跃指代？求认证
3、E中OG说in a 1991report的修饰有问题。不知道错在哪里？
另外副词的位置到底随不随机呢？我记得看到过一种说法说副词位置很随便的。。求指教

多谢~

天使追梦 · 发表于 2010-9-10 13:31:33

ding!

qingbo · 发表于 2010-9-10 20:06:15

同问， A选项中为什么会有and？

我当初排除A的原因就是and存在的不太合理

qingbo · 发表于 2010-9-10 20:22:21

看来只能死记硬背了

.... consumption of acohol, and particularly of red wine

.....alcohol consumption, particularly of red wine

.....consumption of alcohol, particularly red wine

.....alcohol consumption, and particulary red wine's

天使追梦 · 发表于 2010-9-10 21:16:36

看来只能死记硬背了

.... consumption of acohol, and particularly of red wine

.....alcohol consumption, particularly of red wine

.....consumption of alcohol, particularly red wine

.....alcohol consumption, and particulary red wine's

-- by 会员 qingbo (2010/9/10 20:22:21)

？列出这些是什么意思？

天使追梦 · 发表于 2010-9-11 00:34:47

顶！

天使追梦 · 发表于 2010-9-11 20:34:27

aeoluseros · 发表于 2010-9-12 10:08:23

umm...and并列的是总体与其子集，确实一直是大家疑问的焦点，既然OG接受之，那么我们也接受之…不过去掉and肯定是对的。

(1)which可以做简单的跳跃修饰，所谓简单，并不是指不能跳过一层以上修饰语，如果句意明晰，which甚至可以跳过两重修饰语，所以允许跳过插入语指代，不过反过来讲，which离其指代对象远了，必然是不好的，读者读起来会很模糊。
(2)which也可以不跳跃插入语指代，在C里面，which没有很清晰的理由不指代red wine，所以就有了指代歧义。

副词常常是修饰最近的（同一意群的）它可以合理修饰的成分，比如动词，句子……
而且“副词的位置”是一个比较大的语法点，某些副词如only还必须向后修饰。可以百度一下。

天使追梦 · 发表于 2010-9-12 14:38:34

umm...and并列的是总体与其子集，确实一直是大家疑问的焦点，既然OG接受之，那么我们也接受之…不过去掉and肯定是对的。

(1)which可以做简单的跳跃修饰，所谓简单，并不是指不能跳过一层以上修饰语，如果句意明晰，which甚至可以跳过两重修饰语，所以允许跳过插入语指代，不过反过来讲，which离其指代对象远了，必然是不好的，读者读起来会很模糊。
(2)which也可以不跳跃插入语指代，在C里面，which没有很清晰的理由不指代red wine，所以就有了指代歧义。

副词常常是修饰最近的（同一意群的）它可以合理修饰的成分，比如动词，句子……
而且“副词的位置”是一个比较大的语法点，某些副词如only还必须向后修饰。可以百度一下。

-- by 会员 aeoluseros (2010/9/12 10:08:23)

斑斑可以看一个语法班啦~必火~谢谢啦！~

aeoluseros · 发表于 2010-9-13 09:45:50

还差好远:-P

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