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请问怎么入队互批作文呢?

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发表于 2013-5-5 21:24:33 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
怎么入队互批作文啊?我是新手。希望多指教啊。。。。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Itis more important for schools to fund their students’ social activities than toimprove students’ meals.
Have you ever bored with the dull studyin the school? Have you ever dreamed of the colorful life in university when wewere in high schools? Have you ever expected to join in amounts of socialactivities to broaden our eyes, improve our social abilities, and make friendswho are in the same camp? All of these cannot be achieved, only if schoolsconcentrate on students’ meals instead on the establishment of socialactivities. So I totally stand for the first decision.
First and foremost, social abilities areable to let students suit the society early. This ability is a best way to changenowadays phenomenon that college students are too pure to work after graduationbecause of lacking social abilities. As far as I’m concerned, schools inAmerica really set a good example for us because they think highly of socialactivities in schools. For example, we definitely have seen many of Americanseries and we can see that in schools students’ daily life, social activities,such as classmate party, club events, and some spontaneous dating take up theiralmost half the time in everyday. A popular series named broke girls shows thisphenomenon in America a lot. One of two girls is graduated from TheUniversity of Pennsylvania Wharton School and inthe past her life is wealthy but after some changes she has to work in a restaurantas a waitress. However, in this restaurant, she does a very good job and getsalong very well with customers because in college she participated in a lot ofsocial activities, knowing how to get along with people. Her mature attitudetowards the world and life really touches me. That’s what I think that china isdeficient in.
Furthermore, with the increasing competitionfilled in our society, knowledge is no longer a pivot, a key to success, anymore and social skills now are gradually playing an important role for us tooutshine among the contemporary. A prominent way for us to acquire this skillis school, a place can offer us the opportunity to participate variousactivities. Once I heard a survey made by a international company. This companychose some employees in different countries to take role in a test, lettingeach of them complete a research among ranges of people and use different waysas far as you could to attain what you wanted. It’s a task can reflect one’ssocial skills to communicate with strange people. Everyone can conclude theoutcome, Americans and Europeans reach their goals quickly and perfectly andChinese and Japanese in the end completed only one third of the task. I holdthe view that this example gives us an important inspiration that joining insocial activities in schools is essential.
Admittedly, meals also are essential forstudents’ life. But many students now more prefer to eat outside and thereforeschools don’t need to invest in canteen to improve the quality of meals.Furthermore, the advantages of founding social activities outweigh theadvantages of enhancing students’ meals.

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沙发
发表于 2013-5-6 12:51:55 | 只看该作者
看大本营的说明;
要入小分队互改,首先要求写小分队的题目;其次,写完要占座,表示你写了,需要互改!
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-5-6 16:39:31 | 只看该作者
超级无敌小鹤鹤 发表于 2013-5-6 12:51
看大本营的说明;
要入小分队互改,首先要求写小分队的题目;其次,写完要占座,表示你写了,需要互改! ...

好的谢谢。6号的我已经占完了
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2013-5-9 09:06:31 | 只看该作者
超级无敌小鹤鹤 发表于 2013-5-6 12:51
看大本营的说明;
要入小分队互改,首先要求写小分队的题目;其次,写完要占座,表示你写了,需要互改! ...

鹤鹤你是楼主吗?我5.7号的作文没人帮我改。定了人可是那人没改。肿么办啊
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