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梦幻森林 · 发表于 2010-10-16 14:48:19

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

A.their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging

B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging

D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market, which ranges
答案是B，我看讨论题，争议出现在E，主要说which指代方面，我认为E存在明显短语错误，该排除，而which可以跳过介词短语修饰前面名词，不记得那里讲过的了，好像是白勇书里的吧。
我现在的疑问在D。先贴一道og49题。
The automotive conveyor-belt system, which Henry
Ford modeled after an assembly-line technique
introduced by Ransom Olds, reduced from a day and
a half to 93 minutes the required time of assembling a
Model T.
(A) from a day and a half to 93 minutes the required
time of assembling a Model T
(B) the time being required to assemble a Model T,
from a day and a half down to 93 minutes
(C) the time being required to assemble a Model T,
a day and a half to 93 minutes
(D) the time required to assemble a Model T from a
day and a half to 93 minutes
(E) from a day and a half to 93 minutes, the time
required for the assembling of a Model T
Rhetorical construction; Idiom
h e underlined portion of the original sentence is
awkward because the verb reduced is followed by a
prepositional phrase rather than the direct object
time. Changing this structure so that the object
immediately follows the verb, reduced the time, also
allows an idiomatic error to be corrected. Required
should be followed by an in? nitive, to assemble,
rather than a prepositional phrase, of assembling.
h e phrase indicating time should be used to
complete the sentence: reduced the time required to
assemble a Model T from a day and a half to 93 minutes.

A Placement of phrases creates an awkward
construction; required … of assembling is no
idiomatic.
B Being required and down to are wordy
constructions; the comma is unnecessary.
C Being required is wordy; the construction
from … to indicates time, not to alone.
D Correct. h is sentence has a clear, concise,
and idiomatic construction.
E Beginning with the prepositional phrase is
awkward; the comma is unnecessary;
required for the assembling of is wordy and
awkward.
h e correct answer is D.
两道题类似，increase后代直接宾语的只有A和D，如果A项里的their变成its，那就完美了，和og题里的D项一个结构。那么现在我是选了D项的，只有他符合这项原则。敬请大牛们指教！

梦幻森林 · 发表于 2010-10-16 15:22:59

D也不对，多了一个in，啊啊啊啊啊啊

ln200516 · 发表于 2010-10-16 23:50:35

D也不对，多了一个in，啊啊啊啊啊啊

-- by 会员梦幻森林 (2010/10/16 15:22:59)

我一点都没看懂楼主你问什么意思。。。囧
我太弱智了。

梦幻森林 · 发表于 2010-10-17 11:17:54

D也不对，多了一个in，啊啊啊啊啊啊

-- by 会员梦幻森林 (2010/10/16 15:22:59)

我一点都没看懂楼主你问什么意思。。。囧
我太弱智了。

-- by 会员 ln200516 (2010/10/16 23:50:35)

呵呵，是我写的太乱了。
og上的题目说reduce后不能直接跟介词短语，必须直接接宾语，所以选D。
那么这道题只有A是直接宾语，B、E都是介词短语，开始我选D，没看到前面有个in，所以也是错的。
这样的话就不知道该选哪个了。

梦幻森林 · 发表于 2010-10-18 23:00:32

自己顶一下，谁能帮忙解答

fubeilei88 · 发表于 2010-10-24 23:27:18

选E不选B，解析看08prep语法笔记（prep1-210题）

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