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xiaoguolulu · 发表于 2010-8-30 17:31:22

"Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted" in the stride-piano tradition of whillie Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz reportory.

A.Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
B.Thelonious monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
D.Jazz pianist pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

答案是D.谁能告诉我B哪里错了？谢谢啦！

xiaoguolulu · 发表于 2010-8-30 23:45:48

再次求解！大虾快来啊~

zhaogeorge · 发表于 2010-8-30 23:53:28

如果非要用both的话，后面必须是（both）in the stride-piano tradition of whillie Smith and IN Duke Ellington这样的结构；B当中的主语部分也比较混乱。

xiaoguolulu · 发表于 2010-8-31 00:01:43

哦，清楚了，谢谢大虾！

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