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发表于 2010-9-1 15:40:48 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
题目:there will be fewer cars in use after 20 years than there are today.

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It is a fact that people are getting more and more concious on enviroment preservation today,we see notions about this issue everywhere,no matter on buses,televisons or newspapers.and a stronger and stonger voice of claim to less cars in use has been brongt into focus which lead to some innocent people are prone to believe there will be fewer cars running in 20 years than there are today.however, this is not the case from my perspective.

though some concrete actions has been done to aviod pollution,the desperate plight of enviroment condition can't eclipse the fact that the overheated desiration of potential car use derived from the need of all kinds also had to be be taken into consideration without decay.

accompanied with the prompt urge from enviromentalist is the daily increasingly neccessary demand for dramatically more cars,especially in those developing country where their starting of economical prosper produced numourouse amount of newly-wealth and middleclasses who want to enjor luxieries as did in western countries.among them,cars is their first chioce to display the wealth.one of my friends's family is right the example.can you imagine a 3-people family possess 5 cars?it is what really happend in real life.

after all,not all people are heartfelt proponent to enviroment protection.except those with huge properties,most general public owns a simple will to get a car just for convenience.life in today have married to cars since the restrictions people reside usually extend across a dramatical areasour society is filled with such instances.it is up to 2 hours for my parent spending on cars to go to work.how it will be without a car?5hours'walking to work?

undoubtfully,combat to destruction of enviroment is progress continually,whereas,the expanding necessarity for cars is the trend is indeed the truth instead of the nonbers of cars will cut down in 20 years.
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