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[SC悬赏令] SC语法的问题求指教!求解第五题!

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发表于 2013-11-18 00:09:06 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式


第三题:
Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

(A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
(B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
(C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
(D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
(E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

正确答案是D,我的问题是:1. B选项先不考虑其错误地方,这样的语法结构相对于D是不是更简明呢?
                                            2. 这里的both为什么不能理解为源于tradition of Willie 和 duke 呢?需要给duke前加上tradition吗?



第五题:
Most insomnia is not an illness or a physical condition so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a reaction to certain medications, anxiety about travel, or stress before a job interview.
A. an illness or a physical condition so much as a symptom of another problem that may simply be a reaction to certain medications
B. an illness or a physical condition so much as symptomatic of another problem that may be a simple one, like a reaction caused by certain medications
C. so much an illness or a physical condition but a symptom of another problem that may be as simple as when certain medications cause a reaction
D. so much an illness or a physical condition, but it is a symptom of another problem, maybe a simple one like certain medications causing a reaction
E. so much an illness or a physical condition but symptomatic of another problem, maybe simply a reaction to certain medications

正确答案是E,我的问题是:如果用 a symptom of 是不是更有 parrallel 的味道呢?


希望路过的亲们可以拨冗给小妹解答,谢谢!!
最后祝大家GMAT高分飘过!~~
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沙发
发表于 2013-11-18 15:52:16 | 只看该作者
好多啊,一题一个贴会有大牛来的
板凳
发表于 2013-11-18 17:23:03 | 只看该作者
3. 1)有很多句子会有这样的结构,主语+同位语+谓语,简洁程度上两种都差不多;

但我认为这里还是将Jazz pianist and composer前置好,因为后置很容易引起歧义,使读者认为主语是三个人:Thelonious Monk, the Jazz pianist and composer
所以你认为的简明,简和明都不具备;

2)首先浅层面上看,both and 讲究平行,请你看下放在这里平行吗?
第二,请你仔细分析句子的意思,文中rooted 仅仅只在in the stride-piano tradition这里,(详见OG解释)如果你要加both,请这样加: in the stride-piano tradition of both Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington。

4. spoke是谓语动词


希望对你有帮助,杀鸡共勉。
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-18 22:53:23 | 只看该作者
448258130 发表于 2013-11-18 15:52
好多啊,一题一个贴会有大牛来的

哦,这样~~开始我还攒着题,因为担心贴多了浪费论坛位置。谢谢啦!~
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-11-18 23:01:12 | 只看该作者
4Hs 发表于 2013-11-18 17:23
3. 1)有很多句子会有这样的结构,主语+同位语+谓语,简洁程度上两种都差不多;

但我认为这里还是将Jazz p ...

你的答案对我很有启示!~另外第二题的in planning 可能是修饰前面的graduates 的,我当时没看懂。
非常感谢!~
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