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发表于 2010-5-8 12:25:23 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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题目是同不同意 always telling the truth is the most importsant consideration in any relationship
正文It seems a good idea to be dishonest in some relationship. First, punishment and blame may be away from you for your misrepresentation. Second, you may get benefits from those who trust you but you fraud them. So, why don’t you be untruthful in some relationship to get benefits and avoid lost? It all sounds great in the theory. Nevertheless, I do not believe we should lie in some relationship. I will employ several lines of reasoning to support my view.


First of all, it is always top of the list of my viewpoints that friends will leave you if you always lying, especially you harm their benefits and self-respect. To make my demonstration more profoundly and comprehensively, I would like to cite one example. Anger and lonely made a beauty peak and pine when she found her lovely boy-friend betrayed her and she ended their relationship.


Moreover, bank won't lend one cent to dishonest people. That is, truce and honest is the most essential principle in banks. According to 50 studies carried out in 15 major cities throughout China, most of banks refuse to offer a loan to a person who didn't meet his promise. No one can deny the truth behind the number. It also provides adequate justification for my opinion.


Finally, an equally essential factor which deserves people's attention is your own reputation and reliability. Lying companies bad reputation and cannot be trust, and being honest represents a nice guy. In my own relationship, even though he or she thinks that he or she did something wrong that I wouldn’t like, he or she should tell me the truce and not lie about it. If time tell me about his or her lie, I not only fell more unpleasant but also don’t believe in he or she next time.


Although I agree there may be a couple of advantages of lying, I fell that the disadvantages is more obvious and outweigh the advantages. Being honest always gives you more friends and more trust. In addition, banks more likely to offer you a loan to make you life better. On the contrary, lying leaves you alone. In other words, bad reputation and little reliability take your friends and sweetheart apart from you.
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