先贴题。。。
Bluegrassmusician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.
(A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
(D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to
(E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of
1、先说A，PREP笔记说”whose repertory和were influential主谓不一致”，我认为whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style是一组平行，整个作为 influential的主语，而不是单独一个repertory
2、还是A，PREP笔记里说”that included应该用which或者who代替,改为非限定从句”，这个不太懂，想问一下为什么要这么改？
3、A与C，PREP笔记里附上了OG10的解释，OG10解释说“that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians.” 我想请问难道它们不应该修饰many musicians么。。。这是不是跟上一个问题有什么关系。。。
4、再问一个PREP笔记里没有提到的问题，B里的“also inspired”是谓语，那个also。。。我查了一下电子词典，说是also也可以作连词，作连词的时候用法与and一样，只是比较多用and。。。我想问问为什么在一个只有一个谓语的句子里，主谓之间要凭空多个also出来。。。句意里貌似也没有体现“并且”的意思呀。。。
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发表于 2010-4-24 13:10:27
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